Eyes On Me (A Dollhouse Fic)

Apr 13, 2009 17:47



Title: Eyes On Me
Rating: G
Pairing/Characters: Topher/Claire (hinted), mentions of Boyd and Echo
Warnings: None (No spoilers either!)
Summary: Claire feels him watching her. (Challenge 009: "Hide")
Word Count: 221 (so short for me!)

She feels his gaze everywhere.
When she enters the room, his eyes flash to her momentarily, noticing her despite ( Read more... )

fanfiction, pairing: topher/claire, fandom: dollhouse, one-shot

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eiregirl05 April 13 2009, 22:47:41 UTC
Loved it. Very well done :)

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live4dehmoment April 14 2009, 10:36:28 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

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missyvortexdv April 13 2009, 22:53:50 UTC
Nice to see more Claire/Topher fic (must get round to posting mine soon).

One thing - apart from yay - is I found it hard to discern who he was in the paragraph as you mention Boyd and I wasn't 100% sure which bits applied to Boyd and which potentially to Topher, but that may just be me reading this with late night confuddledness.

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live4dehmoment April 14 2009, 10:37:58 UTC
Thanks, I'd love to see yours (POST IT. I'M DYING FROM LACK OF CLOPHER. OR WHATEVER THE HECK THIS PAIRING IS CALLED)!
Oh, I see what you mean. Good catch, dear. *fiddles a bit* Better? =D?

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kgx2001 April 14 2009, 20:27:59 UTC
Clopher? Has an interesting ring to it...Hmmm

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live4dehmoment April 14 2009, 23:03:10 UTC
^_^, that's what I call them when I'm watching the show with my friends. It's the only one I could think of that actually sounded like a REAL pairing name. Like it?

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obiwahn April 18 2009, 08:46:57 UTC
I love the last two lines. Claire is so very ambivalent :P

Nicely done!

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live4dehmoment April 19 2009, 02:12:50 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! LOVE that icon of yours, btw (I've seen you around the claire/topher comm and I kept on forgetting to tell you that I liked it. So here, =D)

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atarashiiyoake April 20 2009, 13:37:25 UTC
I will so pay attention to this pairing once a torrent for ep.10 appears XD



(goooood, I need Amy Acker icons)

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live4dehmoment April 21 2009, 01:42:40 UTC
....You're into Dollhouse? I think I love you all the more, dear. AND YOU TOTALLY HAVE TO PAY ATTENTION TO THIS PAIRING BECAUSE THEY ARE BEYOND WORTH IT, ZOMG, SQUEEEEEEE!
....kay, I'm done.

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atarashiiyoake April 21 2009, 06:20:26 UTC
Of course! Mostly due to my crush on Eliza Dushku ever since I was 11 or so and the fact that Joss Whedon is God (even though I never bothered watching Firefly, lol).

and here I was squeeling over the cuteness of Topher and Ivy XD

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live4dehmoment April 21 2009, 20:41:04 UTC
XD, Eliza Dushku is amazing and the Whedonverse is the only place I'd ever want to live....but yeah, no one watched Firefly (come on, a space cowboy series? Way to steal from Cowboy Bebop, >_>). Angel and Dollhouse are the only shows I ever watched of his but I liked Buffy when Spike was on, =D.

Topher and Ivy, PSHHHHH. Claire/Topher is the way to be, my dear, the way to be.

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xfirefly9x May 1 2009, 07:10:13 UTC
Beautiful! I love this line:

But she can’t do anything, not when her scars are still there to remind them what monsters they all are and when Echo still looks at her in that way, her gaze trusting and her words soothing.

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