Series Title: In his eyes, I find forever (11/13)

Sep 05, 2008 15:34


Title: In his eyes, I find forever (11/13)
Warnings: A little too angsty at times?
Genre: Romance/Angst
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Yeah...well...I wish I owned them, but I don't.
Summary: The storyline starts from when the original Hey!Say!7 guest-starred on Shounen Club and moves on from there. It’s a Takaki-centric fic that follows him from the ( Read more... )

series: in his eyes i find forever, pairing: yabu x takaki, rating: pg

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live4dehmoment September 5 2008, 20:15:52 UTC
HA, thanks, you commented so quickly! LYKWHOAH!

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live4dehmoment September 6 2008, 14:06:57 UTC
^.^, I figured.
xD, I catch on quick like that.

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ssm_kiyumi September 5 2008, 20:30:39 UTC
Wow. I just read your AN, and just... wow. XD
You have so much to do! [don't worry, I have almost as much ><]

mm. I think you're giving away too many things in your A/N's...
There's the only things I comment on anymore though :P

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live4dehmoment September 6 2008, 14:27:55 UTC
Yepppp, that's why I shortened things to once a week. So hectic.
xDDDDDDD, really? I don't know if there's so much to give away anymore, I don't have too many ideas for what's coming next, I just know how I'm going to end.

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ssm_kiyumi September 6 2008, 14:58:55 UTC
mm. I have to finish all my work if my mom's going to let me take japanese again this year! But we'll brainstrom tomorrow for more ideas for the next chapter! :D

mm. idk, I think so. you should let everyone figure out themselves that it's coming to an end :P

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live4dehmoment September 8 2008, 20:54:36 UTC
awwwww, finish, finish, finish! Lolx, most def, I totally need to figure out where to go from here.

xD, maybe. I don't know. I couldn't think of what to write, my head was so cleared from writing all that so the A/N bit was all like....'FILL ME!' and I was like 'WITH WHAT?!?' and so there it was!

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live4dehmoment September 6 2008, 14:10:15 UTC
Enh, people can be like that sometimes. Especially when it comes to themselves.
xD, I didn't think the bakanishi image worked quite for the story's tone. And I love bringing Ryo in...I really wanted to work with him more because HSJ specifically appeared with Kanjani8 that performance. Oh well, maybe whenever I rewrite this. There's a lot of stuff I would fix if I had the time to go back and rewrite right now.
xDDDDDDDDDD, it's a bummer, isn't it? Good luck with your stuff! I was moaning about it on the phone with my best friend last night, we're both so jealous of all those people who say that senior year's the easy one. GAH, LIARS!

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live4dehmoment September 6 2008, 14:25:09 UTC
Seriously...it's so much more complicated than everyone says it is. I still have to get on my senior project...the way I write, that book of mine is going to be fricking ginormous. And I barely have the time to continue it, T_T.
Yeppers, I know I'm like that, ^_^. I've heard the reference before but I don't know, maybe it's because I wasn't into JE when Jin was a bakanishi (if he ever was) but he doesn't really seem the part? Beyond, I don't know, the role in Gokusen 2 (which by the way, Hayuto was SO hilarious), I think he's a lot more mature than people give him credit for.

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anilee0510 September 6 2008, 02:11:19 UTC
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is what I have to say about this chapter. XDD Okay, I'll try translating my...incoherency...somehow...

YABU BREAKS!!!! OMFG!!!!!! *excuses herself as she goes incoherent again* Okay, I'm back. Aww, Hikaru's so...so...so...*can't think* HE CARES SO MUCH, IT'S LIKE....I LOVE YOU HIKARU!!!!!!! XDDD

I love this chapter...I think you can tell...it's not angst angst...but it's like...you finally know what Yabu's thinking...sorta...so...AWESOMENESS!!!

And...dang...that's a lot of things to do...O.o;;; GANBATTE!!

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live4dehmoment September 6 2008, 14:11:54 UTC
xD, I love your incoherency.
Yeah, I'm kind of sad about making Yabuchii suffer so much. But he's got Jin and Hikaru so I think he'll be good.
Yeah...I didn't figure this was quite what you're looking for angst-wise but it was what it was. I'm glad you liked it!
xD, yeah it's a bummer...I'll get through it though, thanks!
Where's Jen? I haven't seen her comment on this yet. I kind of want to see her flail a bit, ^_^.

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anilee0510 September 6 2008, 19:37:37 UTC
I'm taking one AP class and focusing all my energy on it. Jen's taking FOUR AP classes, so she's restraining herself from commenting...cuz yeah...I just had to comment cuz I hadn't seen you in forever and also...YABU BREAKS!!!!! Jen's still around, she's on AIM and everything, and she read your fic, just has no time to comment is all.

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live4dehmoment September 6 2008, 21:10:58 UTC
Ah, I see, I know the feeling. I'm taking four this year and I took four last year. Poor child, tell her I wish her luck. LOLX, You're still hung up on the 'yabu breaks' thing? Silly child. ^_^

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kunimaki3567 September 6 2008, 03:43:52 UTC
YABUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! (T.T)
thanks for taking time to type this!

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live4dehmoment September 6 2008, 13:56:30 UTC
AWWW, first of all, WAY CUTE ICON. I wish I had that pic, T_T.
Lolx, thanks for commenting, nice to meet you!

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