Heroes drabble: "Illumination". Peter/Mohinder. 342 words.

[littlewings04]

Title: Illumination
Characters: Mohinder/Peter
Rating: PG 13
Word Count: 342
Spoilers/Warnings: General character spoilers, but nothing concrete.
Disclaimer: If I owned them, do you think I'd ever let them out of my sight?
Summary: We will find illumination in an unnatural light.

Comments

[neoreulwonhae]

Aww, that was very visual and pretty. Great job!

[littlewings04]

Thank you! I'm a visual creature, I can't help it.

[eonism]

Oh my gosh, just....unf. I love love love this. So sweet and sensual and tender and, just, guh. Beautiful.

[littlewings04]

Thank you so much! It just kind of came to me from the line in the summary I saw scrawled somewhere, and that was that. A little thing, but a pretty one.

[balikpulang]

Beautiful contrasts. I like that Mohinder grounds Peter in a way that Nathan never can. Ever wonder what Peter/Isaac could be like?

[littlewings04]

It's that contrast, I think, that makes it work. Peter tends to be the little black dress of Heroes, you know? He goes well with a whole lot of people, and is always gorgeous!

[tracker_lucifer]

Very good with the descriptions. Could just imagine and see things through Peter's eyes. Bravo on this sensual drabble. *gives a cookie* and welcome to the group :D

[littlewings04]

Thank you, and yay cookies! Thanks so much for the welcome!

[tallisen]

LJ ate my last comment, but I wanted you to know what I thought.

This is so beautiful.

The contrast of colours and curves and sloping - they're all so vivid!

I can't get the image of Mohinder and Peter out of my mind; you painted them so perfectly!

Thank you!

[littlewings04]

I'm so glad you liked it! I often wonder if my art school experience helps with these sorts of visuals, and I think today, it might have. Thank you so much!