"The Uneasy Tremors of a Fractured Heart" - Tony, Ziva. Hurt, and some comfort.

[littlesammy]

disclaimer: So not mine. Just borrowed them for play. Put them back unharmed.

notes & warnings: The happenings right after 10x22 "Revenge", meaning: spoilers for this episode. Ziva, being all weak. Tony, being all strong.
Shout-out to Steve and Mary-Kate, for being my willing test subjects.

word count: 4,000

comments & feedback: Very much

Comments

[kytivafan]

Wow. Sammy - this one ranks right up there with Flavor as one of my favorite stories. The emotions are just so...raw & real.

I have so much more to say, but I am on my phone & the virtual keyboard hates me.
I will write more when I get home, I will be walking around with a tender & bruised heart all day.

Thanks for that! *grins*

[gingerstorm101]

Brilliant as always Sammy! I loved it! I could actually feel how broken ZIva was. Sadly, no tears, but I'm in a classroom with my classmates and teacher, and I'm not one to cry in public, but I still loved it.

And thank you! I wasn't expecting this when I came on this morning! *hugs*

Now off to think about/start my next project

[babygrljo]

Oh Sammy, how I've missed thee since the finale!

You really do write heartbreakingly beautiful angst that I can visualize perfectly in my mind! Made my day to read a new one-shot from you!

Can't wait to see what else you have planned for us this summer!

[bugaboobrittz]

This one hurts a lot, but it is so beautiful. It really makes you wonder what would have happened after the end scene in Vance's office, and this fits so well. I feel as though their post-Berlin emotions would be very evident at this point, especially for Tony after seeing Ziva so beaten. Thank you for sharing your gift with all of us.

[vincegfan]

This story was so beautiful. Blew me away! It was perfect.