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Aug 03, 2011 00:47

I do realize that fanfiction often comes up with certain liberties. Still, sometimes I find stuff that irritates me. (Okay, okay - not just sometimes...) Take, for instance, this:

the exposed swell of her breasts that were nearly pouring out over her bra

Okay, let me illustrate something for you about the character in question:


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*headdesk*, this week's rant, writing

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littlesammy August 2 2011, 22:58:30 UTC
*snorts* Okay, that made me laugh. :D

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zaedah August 2 2011, 23:37:40 UTC
The author either gave her the world's strongest push up bra or envisioned Ziva post-cosmetic surgery?!?

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rebecca_in_blue August 3 2011, 02:55:10 UTC
You're right, Ziva doesn't have a chance of any spillage. But somehow, I don't think Tony minds. ;)

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ryalin1 August 3 2011, 04:48:13 UTC
Thanks for the best (and only) laugh I've had all day.

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alidiabin August 3 2011, 06:22:03 UTC
Yeah her boobs don't swell.

Oh lucky lucky lady, how nice it must be not to have back ache from massive boobs.

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