Aug 26, 2010 23:11
When President Yang announced the elimination, Jiyong cried. He cried for Hyunseung, but not for Seungri.
But as you can see, My story seems to be far from that one line T.T
But I have more ideas to write another oneshot, a better one keke, with the same inspiration. This one just never came out as I wanted it to
^-^' TY for reading~!
written on spot!,
inspiration-dead-,
fail,
fan fiction: oneshot
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poor maknae.
i was hoping to see ji's reaction when he see ri.
no sequel?
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If anything comes up, I'll probably post it anyways. :)
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YOU should write the sequel and claim it as yours.I don't want to take credit for a story that has been written by someone else(: !
Although, it'd be nice if my name is mentioned in there at least at once. If isn't too much to ask?
Thank you for asking and coming up with that idea, have fun with it! ^-^
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is there gonna be a sequel??? pretty please with a cherry on top??? :D
Ri baby just come to me! :D
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haha :) We'll see~
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lol ya it is but its the good kind so its all good :D
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:)
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i feel bad for ri...hopefully ji will realize something soon.
this should be cont'd ^^
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God, this line just kills me though out the story. I watch videos of interviews and see pictures and sometimes his smile is just so forced that it hurts.
I love the way you looked at the relationship between Jiyong/Seungri/Hyunseung. I have always been super interested in the way they interact because we all know how much Ji doted on Hyunseung before, but then when he was gone, it was almost like Ri took the runner-up place in his forced-snuggles.
I dunno,I'm babbling. I love this, though. Great job!
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aww this is exactly how i think seungri feels sometimes, like he has to pretend he's confident and unaffected by anything in front of the cameras. but sometimes he has this expression on his face like he's really not okay inside.. ;__;
please write a sequel!! i'll look forward to reading more hehe ^___^~V
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I can understand what your talking about. I remember in Daily Star Reading(I think it was) that confidence was what he had, what he needed. That really made me sad, that he can't trust many people around him. :x Sometimes even the others, sucks how other make it worse sometimes..
ah~ I have griluvisvip writing the sequel for this(: Since my ideas are running out, but there may be a chance I'll be writing another story based on the same inspiration ;P !
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