Why now? Why ever?

Aug 26, 2010 23:11

When President Yang announced the elimination, Jiyong cried. He cried for Hyunseung, but not for Seungri.
But as you can see, My story seems to be far from that one line T.T
But I have more ideas to write another oneshot, a better one keke, with the same inspiration. This one just never came out as I wanted it to

^-^' TY for reading~!

written on spot!, inspiration-dead-, fail, fan fiction: oneshot

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aishiteru_amie August 27 2010, 13:35:30 UTC
auww..
poor maknae.
i was hoping to see ji's reaction when he see ri.
no sequel?

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littlerio August 27 2010, 20:34:33 UTC
I didn't know how to continue on. -__-'
If anything comes up, I'll probably post it anyways. :)

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griluvisvip August 28 2010, 05:18:20 UTC
uhh hmm if I may impose, would you mind if I wrote the sequel? Or like, I could ghost write it for you :) [note: ghost writing is where one person writes the actual thing, but someone else puts there name on it and claims credit.] I have an idea of where this should go and how it should end, though I think we all know how it should end.

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littlerio August 28 2010, 06:39:02 UTC
I'd be delighted to have you write the sequel~! I think this will be interesting, your idea. Even though I don't know what it is. x)
YOU should write the sequel and claim it as yours.I don't want to take credit for a story that has been written by someone else(: !
Although, it'd be nice if my name is mentioned in there at least at once. If isn't too much to ask?
Thank you for asking and coming up with that idea, have fun with it! ^-^

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azenzensation_0 August 27 2010, 14:01:21 UTC
awwww! T_T
is there gonna be a sequel??? pretty please with a cherry on top??? :D
Ri baby just come to me! :D

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littlerio August 27 2010, 20:35:27 UTC
This is deja vu isn't it?
haha :) We'll see~

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azenzensation_0 August 29 2010, 03:09:51 UTC
-_-........ fine i'll wait.....
lol ya it is but its the good kind so its all good :D

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littlerio August 29 2010, 03:17:20 UTC
"A sequel is coming, a sequel is coming!!"
:)

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gemofmusic August 27 2010, 21:22:29 UTC
awwwwww
i feel bad for ri...hopefully ji will realize something soon.
this should be cont'd ^^

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papersanguine August 28 2010, 00:02:57 UTC
"Just a little more Seunghyun.."

God, this line just kills me though out the story. I watch videos of interviews and see pictures and sometimes his smile is just so forced that it hurts.

I love the way you looked at the relationship between Jiyong/Seungri/Hyunseung. I have always been super interested in the way they interact because we all know how much Ji doted on Hyunseung before, but then when he was gone, it was almost like Ri took the runner-up place in his forced-snuggles.

I dunno,I'm babbling. I love this, though. Great job!

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squippy67 August 28 2010, 13:19:33 UTC
yay you wrote it!! it's not boring lol, it's good!!! :)

aww this is exactly how i think seungri feels sometimes, like he has to pretend he's confident and unaffected by anything in front of the cameras. but sometimes he has this expression on his face like he's really not okay inside.. ;__;

please write a sequel!! i'll look forward to reading more hehe ^___^~V

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littlerio August 29 2010, 03:09:38 UTC
Thank you for complimenting and reading it, I'm glad you do~ since It was you where I made this story from. :D
I can understand what your talking about. I remember in Daily Star Reading(I think it was) that confidence was what he had, what he needed. That really made me sad, that he can't trust many people around him. :x Sometimes even the others, sucks how other make it worse sometimes..

ah~ I have griluvisvip writing the sequel for this(: Since my ideas are running out, but there may be a chance I'll be writing another story based on the same inspiration ;P !

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