Comments | littlenotebook: I think I might’ve inhaled you

littlenotebook

I think I might’ve inhaled you

May 27, 2011 16:04

Title: I think I might’ve inhaled you
Fandom: Sherlock
Disclaimer: I do not own Sherlock, that is the property of the BBC and Steven Moffat. I am simply taking them out to play.
Pairing/Characters: Sherlock/John
Word Count: 5,176
Rating: PG-13
Summary: As John sinks toward the bottom of the pool, Sherlock tight against his chest, he thinks that ( Read more... )

sherlock, sherlock: sherlock/john

Comments 23

scorpla May 28 2011, 13:36:34 UTC

If you could be inside Johns head I imagine it would have to be something like this. The stream of consciousness never let up, you weaved it in and out of John and Sherlock and I loved the timing of the whole story. Loved the detail of John counting as soon as he hit the pool of how much c4 there was vs amount of fire, such a great BAMF John moment! The ending was so wonderful with John waking up and being so in synch with Sherlock. (I know I'm gushing, I can't help it!) There was something about the dream like quality of this that is going to have me coming back, thanks for sharing it and I'm off to find more from you!

sunnyrea May 29 2011, 22:27:16 UTC

I like gushing, thank you!

sam80853 May 28 2011, 13:46:28 UTC

\o/

Lovely!

littlelorayne May 29 2011, 02:56:23 UTC

HHHH. That was absolutely one of the most beautiful things I have ever read in my life. And I read Keats on a semi-daily basis. The way you capture their personalities and their relationship is perfection, and the story flows with such amazing rhythm. I want to wrap this fic up in one of John's jumpers and snuggle with it until Sherlock comes to take it back. Love, love, love.

sunnyrea May 29 2011, 21:48:15 UTC

*blush* well thank you

animelore May 29 2011, 04:47:23 UTC

(Wanted to comment last night, but like I told you, my phone was being bitchy and I didn't want to leave an anon message.)

I really really really loved this. Beautifully written and impossible to look away from once I started reading. You know I'm going to pester you to write more Sherlock now, right?

sunnyrea May 29 2011, 21:44:29 UTC

Hey, sometimes I have moments of genius!

angelshandprint May 29 2011, 05:22:32 UTC

This is my first Sherlock fics. I just started watching it yesterday and yeah, the slashiness was there as I'd expected. And this is really, really beautiful. I love the title, yes I love it like my stuffed unicorn. The way you captured Sherlock was WOW. It was very him and the moment they become together was just pure beauty.
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