picture and poem

May 06, 2009 10:08

ok guys i know ive been poeming it up recently but this is the last one i promise, and its not the same as the tohers its about soccer :D

i made a picture a few weeks ago and i want to share it with u it sort of inspired this poem, wellt his picture and the crazy goal i scored the toher week to open my account for the season ( no better way to ( Read more... )

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love it! lizkaras May 14 2009, 00:59:09 UTC
Seb this is amazing, I really love this poem! It is very emotive, with your short sentences and use of punctuation separating each word. It really left me wanting more but certainly gave a feeling of elation towards the end.

Very well done!
Liz

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