It takes only a week...and a year part 2 end

Aug 25, 2012 04:48


Title: It takes only a week....and a year. Part 2 end
Pairing: Kyusung, Mentioned Hanchul, Eunhae, Kangtuek, Simin
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I'm from Ohio...not too many hot korean idols to own or make money of off. So do you think I'm doing that with these boys?...didn't think so
Summary:Jongwoon is on his vacation from his service and meets Kyuhyun.

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It takes only a week...and a year part 2 end )

character: kyuhyun, character: heechul, pairing: hanchul, pairing: kyusung, rating: pg-13, character: yesung, fandom: super junior

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ruuusak August 25 2012, 20:08:06 UTC
well it was great until last part, it all went so fast. not enaugh kyusung moments imo.
but still the whole (last part and this one) story is very good.
keep up with good work! <3
fighting!

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littlemenomaru August 25 2012, 20:30:46 UTC
I know it went fast. A lot of that was just me trying to finish it last night. If I wasn't trying to have it done for Jongwoon's brithday I probably would've stretched it out more. ^^"
There are never enough Kyusung moments. I tried to keep Heechul out of this half a little more so Kyuhyun and Jongwoon could have a little more together, but it was still kind of lacking. sigh.

Thanks. I will, My friend wants me to write a squel to this, but I'm not sure how.

^^♥

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junnosukex3 August 26 2012, 11:18:05 UTC
I'm glad you post the final part ^^

It was a nice story ! I like the way JongWoon ant HeeChul are with eachother !

I would have loved more KyuSung, but it was coherent and nice this way ^^

Thanks !

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littlemenomaru August 26 2012, 17:50:50 UTC
Thank you^^

I love them together in any non-romantic way. They're the perfect best friends or brothers. No one can match the mad cat as well as the rabid dog can^^ (Well aside from Hannie loving Chulie. haha)

I would've loved a little more myself, but time didn't allow it. But I'm glad you still liked it and found it coherent.

^^♥

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rhenny August 26 2012, 16:56:01 UTC
I love the last part!
Jongwoon's looking for Kyu at his dorm not knowing that Kyuhyun's already at his apartment XD (waiting for him) ((and to kiss him too! XD biased shipper)

the ending is really funny!

thank you for this Liz!
keep up the good work!
fighting!

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littlemenomaru August 26 2012, 17:55:12 UTC
Yay.^^ Glad you did. I was worried since I rushed it at the end.
They just missed each other. haha. But leave it to Kyu to secretly live in Jongwoon's apartment. Well of course to kiss him too. XP

Yay. I thought it was an amussing way to end it. And I can picture it so well.

Thanks for commenting Rhenny. Glad you liked it. ^^

^^♥

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littlemenomaru October 20 2012, 21:15:56 UTC
It's okay. I know you're busy and will comment whenever you find time.

It's not exactly what I originally planned, though really just summed up a little bit. I was really trying to finish it by Jongwoon's birthday so the end got a little rushed and things got shortened.^^" But it was still what I wanted in general.
I wanted a little bit of a unexplainable connection between the two that didn't scream it in your face. Especially Kyuhyun being drawn to Jongwoon and Jongwoon falling back on Kyuhyun's attachment. (If that makes sense).
And how can you go through without Heechul teasings. Especially when he's Jongwoon's best friend. ^^
THough I think Heechul should watch his back...or hide behind Hannie. Heechul killed the mood but Kyuhyun still made it good, right? haha^^

^^♥

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littlemenomaru October 22 2012, 01:26:03 UTC
It's okay, don't worry about it. You'll find a way.

I think you're the only one who has said it wasn't rushed. Too me it is so obviously rushed and to others it feels a little rushed.
Well thank you for saying it did, cause I'm never sure. haha
Kyuhyun had to wait a whole year for that kiss. I don't think a mood killer like chulie could ocme between Kyu and his kiss. haha. Kiss..then kill Chulie. X)

^^♥

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