FIC: Sand (Lost)

Nov 18, 2004 13:18

It's suddenly like 70 out, isn't it suppost to be cold and stuff? I'm wearing flip-flops for pete's sake! Not like I'm complaining or anything. It's just weird ( Read more... )

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autobadgirl November 18 2004, 15:47:12 UTC
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!

They're so close, bodies almost touching, god when was the last time someone touched her like that. She lets her fingers splay out in the sand, grazing his; everything seems like a blur of gold and heat.

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!

And he kisses well, kisses like it's more then just a spontaneous thing, like he was planning this. She kisses him back, sliding her body closer to his.

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!

She turns back as his fingers clasp over her wrist, and pull her in the direction of the jungle. Part of her want to yell at him, about the thing that lives there; but the rest of her, recognizes the look in his eyes and lets herself go with him.

Dinner can wait just a little longer.

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!

::dances and dances hugging myself in sappy shipper glee::

Oh you made me *feel* it. You brought it home and served it for dinner Lia...with a Provencale sauce garnished with truffles even!

Baie'la! I loved this. ::hugs you and makes you do the happy dance with me::

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littlehands November 18 2004, 15:56:46 UTC
*shakes and shimmies in the happy dance with you*

*blushes* So kind you are! Everyone needs a little shippy goodness in their lives. So fun to have a new ship to play with, and write first kisses again, and sex too, lol. Welcome, m'dear!

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danamulder November 19 2004, 01:19:12 UTC
This is a gorgeous piece. I just felt it, I saw them, I heard them. Beautiful.

It is so nice to know someone so talented is writing J/K, because there simply isn't enough of it out there. :) And believe me, I'm starved for it.

I liked Kate fussing about her hair, very realistic. Mine drives me crazy just like that all the time, and I'm not on a deserted island. ;)

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