Sarah Jane Adventures drabble: Everything Changes

[littledoglaughd]

Title: Everything Changes
Author: rustydog
Characters: Sarah Jane Smith, Luke Smith
Rating/warnings: rated G, spoilers for SJA 1x00 "Invasion of the Bane"
Note: Written for tw100 Challenge 91, Sarah Jane Adventures crossover

Comments

[donutsweeper]

exceptional boys need their OJ, and to floss too probably.

Cute! I like it

[rustydog]

Is it cute? Huh. Well, thank you!

I'd like to see Luke at the dentist. *g* I wonder if he has medical office trauma after starting his life in a hospital gown.

[donutsweeper]

okay- maybe cute's the wrong word- slight bittersweet but lovely.

[rustydog]

It's okay, it's just sometimes you write something with a certain tone in mind, but people read it different ways, you know? I think it's neat when that happens, the way the readers brings their own stuff to writing, just sometimes I'm surprised at first. :)

[travels_in_time]

Ooooh, I like the imagery of the tea tendrils being connected in her mind with the general awesomeness of the universe. I get the same thing from the creamer patterns in my coffee. *g* (Only here lately they just look like hurricanes...)

[rustydog]

Thank you! I love watching convection currents - usually for me it's the milk in my tea. I can't imagine why it looks like hurricanes to you...!

[mad_jaks]

Brown tendrils swirled out into the hot water. Suddenly the hugeness, beauty and danger of the universe swept over her
Great line. *Great*
After all, it's the small simple tasks in life that will bring it all home to a person.

[rustydog]

Thank you! ::nods: I think so too. Can't seem to have deep thoughts when I *try*, but let me spread jam on a piece of toast, sometimes, and whoah.