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Ficlet: Chris Pine's Guide to Marysueing

Jul 05, 2011 18:37

Title: Chris Pine’s Guide to Marysueing
Word Count: 3260
Pairing: Pinto
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Chris makes Zach roleplay Spock for a day. Part of the Chris’ PWP Revenge Series
Warnings: PWP, roleplaying, and fluff.
Disclaimer: None of this is true.

( Zach stares at the black uniform. “No.” He crosses his arms and turns to walk away. )

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Comments 10

eefreeboo July 7 2011, 22:29:10 UTC

Guh

Two of my favourite things in this fandom are any descriptions of Chris getting off (he is, after all, walking porn) and Spock, so the idea that Chris gets off to Spock is just... Aww it's so cute how Chris is so into the whole backstory, and is shy about his enthusiasm for it. And I'm convinced that even straighter than a straight thing Chris would go for Spock and Zach anyway, so it's not all that much of a stretch I reckon :)

littleboycalico July 11 2011, 18:03:12 UTC

IKR? What is it about Chris getting all hot over Spock that I absolutely LOVE so much? I just love the idea of him secretly shipping K/S because he thinks it has all the elements of a good romantic story. Like Princess Diaries.

LOL, thanks for prompting this, and I hope it turned out the way you had hoped. hehehe.

annadraper July 9 2011, 02:53:57 UTC

i lol'd several times during this one. i don't even think i could pick out a favorite part because there were so many. also i did especially like the extra dimension (dynamic?) toward the end where zach starts to worry that chris is maybe more into spock than him. the reassurance was extra sweet on top of the sexy and the funny. :)

littleboycalico July 11 2011, 18:04:58 UTC

Aww, I did feel a little bad about making Zach worry that Chris was more into Spock than him. But it all works out in the end. :D Glad that you enjoyed this! Thanks for reading, bb!

medea_fic July 10 2011, 02:29:57 UTC

I'm a total sap I guess, because I really loved that little detail of Zach being happy to hear his own name. :')

And this:
Briefly, Zach wonders if this shyer version of Chris is what it would’ve been like if they had gone on a proper first date and not just fallen into each other’s arms, and into bed together, after a long night and a year’s worth of Scrabble.

Made me d'awwwwww. IDK, you're making me Feel Feelings that are not just "Wow that's hot!" <333

littleboycalico July 11 2011, 18:06:49 UTC

Hee, I'm a complete sap too, which is why I can't leave the fluff out of my fics. I'm glad you liked this! Thanks so much for reading, bb! <333

therumjournals July 20 2011, 10:53:52 UTC

wow chris has been thinking about this fantasy for a while, eh? love the title, too. :-)

“I would request that you address my companion respectfully,” Zach speaks up in Spock’s measured and calm tenor. “I am currently on a top-secret assignment which requires that my identity and purpose not be revealed. My capture and demise would trigger a war of epic proportions, on a scale which this planet has never witnessed and surely would never survive.” - I CAME.

littleboycalico July 20 2011, 20:55:04 UTC

I don't know why the idea of Chris being a K/S shipper is so adorable to me, but it is. I love when he crushes on Spock.

I CAME. Chris did too. In his pants.

YAY!!! I'm so happy you enjoyed this! Thanks for reading, bb!

the_deep_magic July 25 2011, 03:50:52 UTC

A little sad that this is the last in the series, but a good one to finish on! LOVE that Chris has an elaborate backstory all ready to go -- what a perfect little fanboy.

“I can’t wait to see your double ridged cock,” Chris breathes.

Zach’s head snaps up. “My what?”

Hee hee, Chris has been on the internet again.

“Vulcans are stronger than humans,” Zach says quietly.

I had a reaction to this that was much like Chris'. :oD And then so sweet at the end!

I really enjoyed these. Zach is a good sport for going along with these -- I'd say he more than made up for a wasted hour of TV watching!

littleboycalico July 29 2011, 01:12:26 UTC

Hehe, I really like the idea that Chris is secret K/S shipper and thinks that Spock (Zach) is so hot.

Hee hee, Chris has been on the internet again. LOL at the image of his eyes popping out of his head as he reads about Vulcans on the internet!

Hooray! Thanks for reading each one of these and commenting on all of them! It's made me squee with delight! And I agree that Zach has definitely more than made up for that hour of bad TV!