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little_missmimi

Follow One Storm Upon Another (3/3)

Aug 17, 2010 11:50

( Part Three )

jess/jo, big bang 2010, fic: supernatural, jessica moore, follow one storm upon another, dean/jess, dean winchester, jo harvelle

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elusive_life_77 August 19 2010, 19:21:40 UTC

That was really engrossing. I was highly intrigued by the idea of Jess/Jo and you did not disappoint. I kept waiting for a confrontation with Sam but I liked that she let it go and focused on her life with Jo.

HA! And Dean! That was sweet, hot, and funny that she had Sam within arms reach practically and didn't know it.

Great job!

little_missmimi August 20 2010, 19:20:52 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really glad it didn't disappoint and that you enjoyed it.

annabeth August 19 2010, 19:31:32 UTC

You know what I really like about this story? That Jo and Jess are fully realised people -- moreso than we got to see on the show. Jess likes her french fries extra-extra crispy and Jo likes girls. :D I love all the little details.

I do wish it were longer, though. ;D

AND! The sex scene between Jess and Jo was really amazing; it had all the hallmarks of a first-time combined with experience.

And I loved that Jess hooked up with Dean. XD

little_missmimi August 22 2010, 14:49:42 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really glad the way I fleshed them out and the details worked for you. And I'm happy you liked the sex scenes. :D

roque_clasique August 19 2010, 19:45:49 UTC

I really liked this. Broke my heart a little when Jess hooked up with Dean, Sam so close and she never even knew, but I love Jo and Jess together, it was lovely and sexy. Thanks for the read.

little_missmimi August 22 2010, 14:50:06 UTC

Thank you! I'm sorry it broke your heart a little, but I'm happy you liked it anyway.

slartibartfast August 19 2010, 20:35:31 UTC

Aah this is do delicious in so many ways, and definitely just what I needed to cheer me up after a hard day. :) I love all the little details, all the sights and smells and textures you put in. The way you write is so fresh.

The characters are so fleshed out in this. I especially loved Jess, she really rang true, and Jo was her perfect complement. How do you do it? I love it!

Oh, and the sex scenes were totally smokin' hot. ;)

little_missmimi August 22 2010, 14:50:46 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really glad it made your day a little better, and that the girls read well for you.

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little_missmimi August 22 2010, 14:51:01 UTC

Thanks very much!