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sunsets_unseen October 11 2014, 05:51:15 UTC
You've gotten some great advice so far. The only other thing I'd add is not to underestimate the amount of pain and injury blunt force trauma can inflict. Contusions/bruises, especially internal bruising/deep muscle bruises, hurts like a b. And it's not life-threatening, even though it can hurt enough it might make your character wonder if she IS, in fact, dying.

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