I have a character, I'll call her Elena for now, who I need to develop an acute mental break after witnessing one of her good friends being abducted for the slave trade and nearly being taken herself. The story roughly takes place in 16th century Poland and she's about 18 years old
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Post Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD) can occur after a single traumatic event, such as the one you have described, as long as the event involved actual or perceived risk/threat of injury or death to self or others. (In some cases, PTSD can also be developed by hearing about the traumatic death of a loved one.) PTSD would also fit your required symptoms quite well ( ... )
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That's my bad, I should have described this attribute in a different way. She would certainly believe in self defense when necessary, but she wouldn't agree with the idea of something like revenge or torture. If that makes more sense?
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Mmmh. Unless you mean 'empathetic' in a psychic sense - that she literally picks up and has to deal with vibes that ordinary people don't - I just can't find this believable. Only strong, resilient people can manifest empathy that's worth a damn; what you seem to be describing is a weak, egotistic person whose 'sensitivity' amounts to 'Nasty things upset me more than other people because I'm just so much more SENSITIVE than all you ordinary clods'If you want a really cogent reason for her breakdown, how about guilt? Suppose that in this sudden emergency she panicked, pushed her friend off the horse/out of the boat/whatever, and made her escape leaving her friend behind to be captured? That's something that anybody might do and that would be truly shattering; we all like to think we'd behave heroically and stand by our friends in a crisis, and to have been a complete rat is something that she might well just be unable to cope with. (Especially as 16th-century folk placed a much ( ... )
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