I'm writing a fantasy novel in which a character has a curse that makes his blood the source of all magic. This curse only afflicts one person at a time. When that person dies, someone else inherits the curse. This has been going on for a thousand years and the current cursed individual has been held prisoner for 15 years, during which time his
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I felt tired, very tired, both physically and emotionally, prone to cry;
doing sports became impossible: I was too short of breath (I had to run to catch a bus once and almost collapsed in what looked like the worst case of hyperventilation ever, I thought I was dying of asphyxia and I never caught my buson coming back home at the end of schoolday I *needed* to take a nap, and on one memorable occasion, I woke up from the nap disorientated, looking at my watch and not knowing at all if it was 8PM and I had slept a couple of hours, or already 8AM the next day ( ... )
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I think I can use the bruising of his arms and legs from the needle as the "pain" factor, particularly because the needle is larger than the norm (and yes, I do plan on them boiling the needles to sterilize them). The amount of damage this does to him isn't really important as his own blood will heal him, I just need it to be painful.
The details in the book will hopefully help me to write a convincing portrayal of his suffering.
The only thing I'm still working out is how they will feed him. If his life is that miserable, he's probably not going to eat willingly.
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If anything, the worse effects are usually right after a donation. Usually that is fatigue and fainting. I've seen severe headaches, nausea, vomiting, and weakness as well.
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Apart from that, I’d also suggest that anyone kept captive for fifteen years would likely have psychological problems even if he was physically healthy.
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