"Push and Pull"
Title: "Push and Pull"
Pairing: Sunny/Taeyeon
Genre: drama/romance
Warnings: So out of practice, it's not even funny.
Words: 2331
Summary: When violent thoughts become something a little sweeter.
( The stage smile, as Sunny dubbed it, had been tucked away as quickly as it had graced her pretty face. )
Pairing: Sunny/Taeyeon
Genre: drama/romance
Warnings: So out of practice, it's not even funny.
Words: 2331
Summary: When violent thoughts become something a little sweeter.
( The stage smile, as Sunny dubbed it, had been tucked away as quickly as it had graced her pretty face. )
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What a sweet enchanting story!
love sunyeon.. cant wait for part 2 now !
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And this is just awesome, really. Semi-rare pairing, check. Inclusion of real-life incident, check. Believable reactions to said incident, check. Happy semi-sad and still in-character SNSD, check. Even if you're out of practice as you said in this warnings, this is really really good. xD
I've been waiting for a fic that writes about Taeyeon's incident without seeming too exploitative or too casual for the reason of shipping a certain pairing, and I think you handled that really well. Taeyeon's reaction - not using her right hand- was just really believable? I mean, it's not like we know how she actually reacted to that but it just makes sense in that it's not too obvious, and not too subtle either. You have Taeyeon and Sunny down too, from Taeyeon's denial and attempt at coping, to how observant Sunny is and also her natural cuteness rofl.
"Sometimes Sunny watched Kim Taeyeon out of the corner of her ( ... )
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Omigosh, squeee. That you think it's believable and in-character is pretty much the best compliments you could've given me. I'm ecstatic that you think it's good and your wonderful review really put to rest a lot of my worries, coming back to fanfic writing after such a long hiatus!
I'm glad the right hand thing worked out and when the incident happened I was fascinated by the potential ramifications. I'm glad Taeyeon seemed to have brushed it off easily but it certainly makes for good fanfic fodder ;)
I was afraid Sunny's crush would seem too tacked on (against my intentions) but I'm so glad you caught that Sunny was really trying to hide it.
You're very welcome and I hope you'll like the next chapter as much as this one :) It's not so much a continuation of this piece as more of the second part of a series. You'll see!
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& have returned with something that is satisfying my fanfic needs -I've always wanted to read something on these two concerning that event, also on a bigger scale (as you have panning out here) Yay!
I like how Sunny's so observant, and how the Music Bank incident is mentioned (I don't recall reading a piece on that as in depth as it potentially could've been..but then you bring it up here and I'm all -Ha! How clever ;P)
-I think this is pretty realistic and absolutely love that you're writing again (and on SNSD) Yay!
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So so glad it worked for you :3
alshdlajdlaalla; Yay you caught that 8D I really wanted to add it in and show that the girls DO recognize their weaknesses and mistakes. As we've seen post-2008!
♥ I am super glad to be back! ;)
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