"Misunderstood" [2/2]

Jul 16, 2009 03:36

Title: Misunderstood [2/2]
Pairing: Yunho/Yoochun
Genre: AU, drama/romance
Warnings: Not-quite-angst because I can't write angst; cameos from Heechul and Kangin
Words: 10 731
Summary: To Yunho, eight years was never too long. Until now.
Note: Companion piece to Mismatched.

At least he could pretend Yoochun was still his friend, that he was just too busy to see him, to deal with it all )

dbsk, au, misunderstood, multi-chaptered

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mumbles July 16 2009, 09:11:04 UTC
I LOVE YOU! ♥♥♥♥

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mumbles July 16 2009, 11:02:00 UTC
Had to re-read the first part XD

Right I might as well leave a damn long comment since I saw I didn't really comment about your fic the last time.

"It's late," he said softly, almost as if he was afraid to interrupt the careful stillness with which Yunho attempted very hard not to look up at him, to see the usual rumpled shirt or the lipstick smeared on that spot just beneath his earlobe. Yoochun knew this. They had done this routine far too many times. This routine just had me wondering just how many times Yoochun broke Yunho's heart little by little and it was for 8 years!

Making his early runs kept him healthy but physical (and emotional?) strain shone through nonetheless. More like Yunho trying to run away. Makes me wonder whether Yunho's a sadist for putting up with this for 8 years.

The next few days consisted of the same silences and awkwardly stilted conversations. Yunho felt as though he'd lost his nerve - he couldn't look Yoochun in the eye, he could barely function without thinking about all of it, the whole entire mess ( ... )

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little_bibelot July 17 2009, 03:49:49 UTC
Well when I first made references to the 8 years, I was also referring to at least 1 or 2 of their high school years ^_^ Yunho and Yoochun aren't THAT old, although I might have been a little deceptive about their ages in general~ I don't even really know how old they are ( ... )

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kriswu July 21 2009, 17:02:44 UTC
I love your icon :D

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kurogoma July 16 2009, 09:29:52 UTC
oh yes, closure ~ &hearts

"If this isn't what you mean, tell me now because...because in about three seconds, I won't be able to stop myself," Yunho whispered harshly, staring straight into Yoochun's eyes.

Yoochun stared back at him. "Three, two, one?"

yoochun can be so...frustrating, sometimes, i feel sorry for yunho. all that grief, yet so eager at the end. LOL

thank you for finishing this. :D

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little_bibelot July 17 2009, 03:55:50 UTC
I KNOW, finally! :( I'm sorry it took so long! *clings*

Yoochun CAN be frustrating to deal with but Yunho had his own insecurities and uncertaintise as well. While he seemed really self-assured and dependable in Mismatched, he's far from it when he has to deal with his own feelings I think. He has a lot of pride, a lot of expectations for himself, can't bear the thought of himself falling victim to self-pity if Yoochun were to reject him...

Thankfully, he realized he'd survive (as well as their friendship) and all he needed to do was take that step :)

Thank YOU for reading!

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little_bibelot July 17 2009, 03:56:26 UTC
X3 Thank you! I'm glad it worked for you~~ ♥ Thanks for reading!

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flame_angel88 July 16 2009, 11:27:17 UTC
I was reading Part 1 the other day. *__*

I really like how those little details about each character's appearances nudges me naturally into imagining how they looked like, or how they felt. And gosh, I hated Yoochun at first but it wasn't until the end that I realised that Yunho's the one who ran away, and Yoochun's such a big dork. But I'm glad they ended up together. &hearts

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little_bibelot July 17 2009, 04:18:41 UTC
What a coincidence!

Omgg *flails* I think you're the only one to sympathize a bit with Yoochun. He's not really the jerk he appeared to be in Mismatched and Yunho is not really the goody goody self-assured guy either. I liked how I had the opportunity to flesh them out in this one~ Glad the ending was good for you :3 Thanks for reading and all the great reviews!

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atobekazuki July 16 2009, 11:55:58 UTC
-glomps- FINALLY~

Ok...going to read now. 8D

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little_bibelot July 17 2009, 04:05:46 UTC
*hugs* What did you think? ^^

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atobekazuki July 30 2009, 03:59:35 UTC
It was beautiful...and kinda painful to see the two of them dancing around each other so much.

I love Junsu btw, the way he's very frank with the way he think Yunho is. XD Self-delusional. Perfect description for the man.

I'm actually surprised that Yoochun didn't figure it out. But I guess he didn't think it was real cause they were drunk lol

Ahh the element of Changmin. Now I just wonder what'll happen with Su. Does the duck-butt have anyone special?

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