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lithic_rune

Reset - Chapter One

Aug 30, 2010 16:39

Title: Reset
Fandom: Jak and Daxter
Rating: PG13
Summary: Sometimes all it takes is an off-course machine to change the course of time. Jak never made it to the future of his birth. Instead Damas came to the past.
Spoilers: Jak 1, Jak 2, and Jak 3

( Chapter One. )

reset, jak and daxter, fan fiction

Comments 2

truthliesmagic August 30 2010, 23:11:02 UTC

Oooh, I love the idea of this! I can't wait to see what happens when Damas meets TPL Jak.

As always, your writing it brilliant, moving the story along at a reasonable pace without it feeling at all rushed, or with any sacrifice in regards to detail. You have the personality of the Mayor spot-on, and reading this has made me realise that I don't think I've ever read fic with the Mayor featured before. Bonus points for you!

lithic_rune August 30 2010, 23:23:41 UTC

Considering how little you actually get to interact with the mayor, it's not surprising that he isn't featured very often.

I'm really glad to hear that the pace is starting off well. That tends to be one of my weaknesses when writing the initial setup. That whole "let's get this done so I can get the story going!" idea.

Thanks for dropping me a note! Glad you're liking it so far.