Title: Defusion
Fandom: Rockman.EXE
Rating: PG
Summary: It was supposed to be a simple experiment. Nothing was supposed to go wrong. Unfortunately, it did, and now Enzan, Netto, Rockman, and Blues are finding out first hand what happens when a dimensional area shatters.
Warnings: The chapter is complete. The story is not. I have no idea how long it
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I only skimmed, so I cannot give any good advice. It's looks good though.
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Psst. My ego prefers ice cream.
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Heee~ Yes, poor Blues.
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I don't see anything wrong with this one either, but I'm can't really go back for a reread for that right now, so... *feeds your ego lots of yummy clovers*
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Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I really appreciate it!
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*hugs Blues*
It looks good to me so far. And Word doesn't find any grammar errors, so...
*feeds the ego many cookies!*
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I like so far! Onward!
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