EmBilly fic: "Third Wheel" (NC-17) Emilie de Ravin/Billy Boyd

[literarylemming]

TITLE: Third Wheel
AUTHOR: Mnemosyne

Disclaimer: This DID NOT HAPPEN. Emilie de Ravin and Billy Boyd are their own entities and I am not implying in this fic that they have ever or will ever do what I have them doing. No offense is intended.
SUMMARY: "Emilie is waiting on the bed, nude as a Renaissance rendering of Venus, when Billy walks in."

Comments

[koritsimou]

lemming!fic!!!

*goes back to read*

[koritsimou]

*cheers* um, GUH.

[literarylemming]

LOL! Thank you!...? ;)

PS -- Much!Ado!Icon!LOVE!

[yesterday4]

You've got Scottish brogue! *points* My dear dear Melissa, it is almost too much to be able to hear the Billeh in your head when you're reading! *combusts from the hotness that is this story* Lucky, lucky Emilie. Great job!

[literarylemming]

*giggle!* I tried to put in little, LITTLE snatches of the Scottish brogue -- just enough to be there without being overpowering and distracting. I'm glad it worked!

Aren't they just too pretty together? *swoon!*

[shorttracked]

That was ... so unbelievably hot. You and Teffy are damned determined to turn me into a Dombilie/EmBilie person before it's sad and done. I loved the way it was smutty but their was something sweet about it at the same time.

My absolute favorite part was this:
There are days when he feels like the world's forgotten he exists, and those are the days she climbs into bed beside him and holds him close and tells him there is no world but the one they create, and in that world, he's her pole star. He wonders if that makes Dom her axis -- that line around which all things revolve. Billy loves Dom, but there are days he can't stop himself from seething with jealousy that the Brit found Emilie first, and by proxy has a hairsbreadth more seniority in her affections.

It doesn't escape Billy's attention that if he's a pole star and Dom's an axis, that would make Emilie the world.

That just made me want to.. do naughty things to Billy. The boy might have found her second but second doesn't mean anything. No.

[literarylemming]

I'm so glad you liked that passage! It was one of those moments where, as I was typing, I said, "Oh my God, THIS is what this story is about." I had to go back and tweak all these other earlier bits to make them meld, and it took the story to a whole new level for me. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Yes, I would love to do naughty things to Billeh myself. ;) All kinds of naughty things. ;)

And of course we're going to convert you! It's our mission in life. ;) Mwahahaha... ;) LOL!

[shorttracked]

oOO. Yes, I liked it alot. It totally made the story and my day. It totally is what that story is about. I can't wait for whatever you put out next.

Mmm.. Why do I feel the need to go off and run in search of him.

I'm glad to be part of someone's mission. ;) Yay!

[thisisironic]

*dies*

Thanks a lot. Heh. Just what I needed.

*goes back to biting fingernails in anticipation of Lost*

[bigmommaj]

sexcellent