Heroes fic: Who, What, When, Where (Peter-POV, rated PG-13)

[literarylemming]

TITLE: Who, What, When, Where
AUTHOR: Mnemosyne

Summary: Peter's powers go horribly wrong.
RATING: PG-13
WARNINGS: Some possibly disturbing descriptions, but they're fairly minor
CHARACTER(S): Peter-POV, some implied Peter/Claire
SPOILERS: Possible spoilers up to and including episode 1x07, "Nothing to Hide"
NOTES:
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Comments

[thisisironic]

My God, this is just...it...I...*is pwned*

[literarylemming]

*snuggles you!*

[vylentcrymz]

That was so amazing! I loved all the time jumping, it made everything have such a great confusing feel to it without being too hard to follow. And the whole idea of how Peter got his scar and the descriptions of him being pulled apart at the seams by the powers was incredibly realistic. Could definitely see this happening in the show.

[literarylemming]

I WISH something like this would happen in the show. *happy SIGH* That would just... RULE.

Though, it would suck for poor Peter... :\

At least he'd have Claire to take care of him! :D

[kashmir1]

I LOVE IT BABY.

Poor, poor broken Peter.

[literarylemming]

Broken!Peter is sexy!Peter. *nod/giggle!*

[kashmir1]

Too, too true. ;)

[jazmin22]

This fic totally pwns! I love the scar and how Peter got it, how the powers just kept getting stronger, and Peter's overall thoughts.

I like how when Mohiunder and Claire were taking care of Peter, DL and JESSICA were dealing with Sylar. Just really like that they were trying to kill each other the other week and now they are working together. Also like:Or the afternoon when he'd fallen asleep, only to wake up to a panicked Hiro hammering on his front door with the news that time had stopped while Peter was napping.

ADORED Paul, though in my owned head I've been using Micheal or Gabriel for Peter's would be alter ego (Cause we know he is going to have one. It would be such a good device, how could they NOT do it on the show?!). Did Peter not remember maarying Claire because it was actually Paul? That would be cool...

[literarylemming]

*giggle* I figure Jessica's Niki's badass side, so if anyone's going to be wrestling with Sylar, it'd be Jess. *nod!* I called Peter's other half "Paul" in homage to the old saying, "Rob Peter to pay Paul," because I figure anything that makes Paul stronger is going to weaken poor Peter. And Peter didn't remember marrying Claire because that was a vision of the future, which was why it confused him so much when she turned back to present!Claire. Or maybe present!Claire was really just a memory, and married!Claire was the REAL Claire...

Poor, battered Peter. *snuggling him*

[jazmin22]

And Peter didn't remember marrying Claire because that was a vision of the future, which was why it confused him so much when she turned back to present!Claire. Or maybe present!Claire was really just a memory, and married!Claire was the REAL Claire...

0.o;;;

Um...yeah...way to thoroughly confuse ME!

*smooshes Peter*

[literarylemming]

Hee! Now imagine how poor PETER feels! ;)

*smooshes Peter and Claire together*

[literarylemming]

*snuggles you*

[literarylemming]

OMGLOVE!!! *runs!*