Comments | lit_gal: Old War Horses 28

lit_gal

Old War Horses 28

Aug 04, 2011 11:53

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character: jayne (firefly), genre: crossover, character: blair (sentinel), fic: firefly/sentinel: old war horses, character: mal (firefly), character: jim (sentinel)

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mulder200 August 4 2011, 19:12:38 UTC

Ah! Poor Jim! His father is truly something. And I love when Jayne is the voice of wisdom.

lit_gal August 4 2011, 23:19:07 UTC

His father is a wealthy man trying to figure out when he lost control over his life and his sons.

1_mad_squirrel August 4 2011, 23:18:41 UTC

So great to have so much of this in such a short space of time!

lit_gal August 4 2011, 23:19:32 UTC

Thank you so much. It's nice to finally feel like I can get the story out. The muse... she has not been happy lately.

anonymous August 5 2011, 12:39:47 UTC

Great! How did Willliam Ellison ever get the idea a lie could work? Jim is just the sort of person who could get a sort of autopsy on his old dog. Steve might have confessed. Charlie might have boasted. Lies are stupid. Especially ones that can be revealed.
Also not only does this hurt Jim, it means that Stevie never went into therapy and Charlie stayed a menace. Also what about teamwork and cooperation?

lit_gal August 5 2011, 17:47:10 UTC

I think William, like a lot of parents, was a little clueless. IN canon, Lieutenant Womak was a murderous, cheating ass, so I figure that he wasn't much fun to grow up with. However, parents make excuses. They never see the real danger their children might pose to others.