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keladry4664 June 5 2011, 19:06:42 UTC
Great chapter!

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lit_gal June 5 2011, 19:08:44 UTC
Thank you.

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skeptic7 June 5 2011, 20:31:59 UTC
Another chapter today! How wonderful!

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lit_gal June 5 2011, 20:33:37 UTC
And hopefully the quality is holding. I'm actually working on Mal and Jayne waking up now. Sometimes the muse sings. Sometimes she sits on a hill and screams obscenities at me.

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sarah0832 June 5 2011, 20:47:31 UTC
All I can say is WOW! Love this series! Looking forward to the morning after. Will Mal have a freak out? Inquiring minds want to know.

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lit_gal June 5 2011, 22:39:33 UTC
Well thank you very much. I figure with all the flailing Mal and Jayne are doing, someone has to be the stable relationship. ;)

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mulder200 June 5 2011, 23:46:28 UTC
“I’ve only had sex with you since the senses came online. Kaylee doesn’t sound like you, and Simon makes the sort of noises that make me think he’s practiced making polite sex noises.” The man sounded polished and polite, even during sex.” Jim actually found that a little disconcerting, but then Simon did have some odd notions. “Mal and Jayne sound more like us.”

“Oh.”

LMAO! Poor Jim! Then again...

Having super sense can be quite handy!

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lit_gal June 7 2011, 20:20:58 UTC
Jim really is stuck here. He knows that Mal would kill him for eavesdropping, but it's not like he can turn it off.

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dustandroses June 5 2011, 23:56:23 UTC
Oh, man. Three chapters at once. I'm so lucky. And so are Mal, Jayne, Blair and Jim! Very hot!

I have to admit, Mal got his shit (somewhat) together quicker than I expected. He's sure to have a few breakdowns along the way, but he's made some definite advances in a relatively short period of time. Good for him - good for Jayne, too.

For as easy going as Mal tells himself he is about those that are sly, he has some mighty big road blocks in his way concerning the physical acts involved. I hope he doesn't made too much of a mess of things in the morning.

:::hugs my favorite stubborn Firefly boys:::

I love your descriptions of Jim during sex. I haven't read a lot of Sentinel fic, since it's only on the periphery of my Fandom experience through countless crossovers, but the way you describe his senses when he's lost in sexual pleasure are amazing, and far more erotic than most others I've read. Wow.

Can't wait for more!

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lit_gal June 7 2011, 20:22:44 UTC
The guys really wanted to have some sex. I think that what Mal and Jayne did was close enough to Mal's fantasies that it was easy for him to let himself go along. However, morning brings a brisk dose of reality and a naked Jayne. That's going to be the hard part for Mal to handle.

And there's more up now. ;)

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