Old War Horses

[lit_gal]

Comments

[spiceblueeyes]

Wow, this was kind of a sad chapter. I hope Blair gets to see Naomi again. And poor Inara.

[lit_gal]

This is a sad story, in many ways. I'll try to cheer you up a bit with the next chapter

[mulder200]

Ah! That was heartbreakingly sad. Poor Inara!

[lit_gal]

I really wanted to give Inara a proper voice and send off... not just ignore the canon attraction

[zilentdreamer]

Awesome chapter. I love how well you peg River's random statements.

I will never stop being impressed by how true you stay to the characters.

[lit_gal]

Thank you so much. I do love these characters, that makes it easy to write them.

[1orelei]

Oooh, I really like Inara here - can I say that? She's awesome. And I like your Naomi too, even if we're only meeting her through Blair's interpretation.

River too, and her non-attack elephants. Amazing how you can give me a chapter of full of Blair, and I come out of it admiring all females.

[lit_gal]

I really wanted you to have sympathy for the women. Just because I'm taking this slash doesn't mean that I have to disrespect or ignore that this series is het oriented.

[lit_gal]

I love Jayne because he says what everyone things but would never dream of saying, and then he says it in the most blunt and offense way possible. You have to love that. Well, as long as you don't actually have to deal with that personality in RL, anyway