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epona34 April 20 2011, 06:08:22 UTC
Right facts, bad conclusion...
Great update. Thanks for sharing.

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lit_gal April 20 2011, 06:13:54 UTC
But I have to figure that this is how they would react. At least the battle plan is underway now.

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zilentdreamer April 20 2011, 06:29:53 UTC
This sucks...in a perfectly written totally believable kind of way.

You know you're reading good stuff when it ties you up into knots and makes you want to hit things.

^-^

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lit_gal April 26 2011, 05:02:36 UTC
Awwww... I'm so glad that I could tie you up in knots *g*

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mulder200 April 20 2011, 07:02:07 UTC
OT:
You want to make sure that the slayer doesn't shove her bloody big sword and you.

I think you meant into here.

Poor Xander! Once again, he's stuck in the middle of a moral grey zone. Sadly, they really don't have much of a choice.

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lit_gal April 26 2011, 05:03:20 UTC
The microphone has trouble telling in from and. Thank you for the catch.

And yes, they are just stuck in a moral gray zone here.

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droolfangrrl April 20 2011, 07:02:53 UTC
fyi: "You want to make sure that the slayer doesn't shove her bloody big sword and you. "

Think you wanted through there rather than and.

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lit_gal April 26 2011, 05:03:48 UTC
I went for "in," but the microphone heard "and." The joys of Dragon Dictate.

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droolfangrrl April 26 2011, 07:09:21 UTC
And you probably still have less goofs than I do typing.

That's why I have "Put your faith not in spellcheckers, for they no knot the difference betwixt six and sex, from and form." in my profile.

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anonymous April 20 2011, 08:48:39 UTC
excellent. I'm especially liking the 'view of Dawn from the outside', and the Orlion's Window (or whatever) reference.

Thanks for the updates!

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lit_gal April 26 2011, 05:04:13 UTC
Thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying the way the season is bending.

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