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lit_gal

Pandora's Box

Jan 29, 2011 23:47

A long time ago, I wrote Ad Libitum. ONE, TWO, THREE, FOUR, FIVE, SIX, SEVEN

This is the sequel

Pandora's Box.
Jim/Blair, Alex/Naomi

( Chapters 1-3 ) ( Chapter four ) ( Chapter Five ) ( Chapter 6 ) ( Chapter 7 ) ( Chapter 8 ) ( Chapter 9 ) ( Chapter 10 )

This having essays due Saturday night is really screwing with my Taming schedule. Anyway, ( Read more... )

fic: sentinel: ad libitum, fandom: sentinel, character: blair (sentinel), pairing: jim/blair, character: alex (sentinel), character: jim (sentinel), character: naomi (sentinel)

Comments 10

mulder200 January 30 2011, 08:15:41 UTC

Oh dear! Poor Blair! Talk about information overload.

This whole thing has really caught him off guard.

And wow! What to go Jim was his quick thinking and honesty.

lit_gal February 3 2011, 03:06:58 UTC

Jim might have needed a natural reaction, but that was a little too much to take in all at once. I really do like writing a clever Jim. I just don't think Caveman!Jim is reasonable given he is a detective and was a Ranger.

zilentdreamer January 30 2011, 08:15:48 UTC

I adore this story! The tension is palpable and I'm literally fidgeting in my chair as I read this!

So good!

lit_gal February 3 2011, 03:07:11 UTC

Thank you so much. I just put more up!

skeptic7 January 30 2011, 18:03:10 UTC

Its wonderful having a new chapter. I feel for Blair. The big secret is coming out and Jim is admitting to it. The doctors in Bethesda might reconsider Blair's involvement in their case.

lit_gal February 3 2011, 03:07:51 UTC

This is not how Blair planned any of this... not that he had plans. But Blair's good at dealing with things as they hit him (at least after some initial panicking).

yanagi_wa February 1 2011, 03:40:43 UTC

Oh, man. That has got to be really scary. Coming out of secrecy like that has to be dangerous. Great chapter.

lit_gal February 3 2011, 03:08:24 UTC

I think Jim knew the minute he was outted in the hospital that he was going to have to take drastic steps or find himself in a whole lot of trouble.

winter_elf February 8 2011, 21:10:57 UTC

Great chapter! I do like a smart Jim too! Because yea, make sure as many people know NOW before the secret military bases & etc come into play! Though I do so understand Blair's panic :)