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lit_gal

Pandora's Box

Jan 22, 2011 22:55

A long time ago, I wrote Ad Libitum. ONE, TWO, THREE, FOUR, FIVE, SIX, SEVEN

This is the sequel

Pandora's Box.
Jim/Blair, Alex/Naomi

( Chapters 1-3 ) ( Chapter four ) ( Chapter Five ) ( Chapter 6 ) ( Chapter 7 ) ( Chapter 8 ) ( Chapter 9 )

A discussion of rain... and weeds... and government conspiracies moving in shadows.

( Chapter 10 )

fic: sentinel: ad libitum, fandom: sentinel, character: blair (sentinel), pairing: jim/blair, character: alex (sentinel), character: jim (sentinel), character: naomi (sentinel)

Comments 15

mulder200 January 23 2011, 06:29:02 UTC

Ah! Poor Blair! He can't save every Sentinel but he will still try.

lit_gal January 30 2011, 08:06:00 UTC

Blair would give anything to protect every Sentinel, but realistically, he cant'.

zilentdreamer January 23 2011, 08:46:45 UTC

Blair! Please don't cry!

The unspoken danger is tying me up in knots! Can't wait to see what happens next.

lit_gal January 30 2011, 08:06:42 UTC

He wouldn't be Blair if he didn't cry over senseless loss. And I'm glad the tension works. I just put up the next part, but I'm afraid the unspoken danger is still lurking.

skeptic7 January 23 2011, 14:52:21 UTC

Its so sad. we didn't even get to know the third man's name. I love Senor Rivera.

lit_gal January 30 2011, 08:07:12 UTC

We don't. He's just one of many sentinels who have died because no one knew how to help them. Naomi's right... things have to change.

yanagi_wa January 23 2011, 22:00:34 UTC

Poor Blair, he knows he can't save everyone but it still hurts. Hope they get home ok.

lit_gal January 30 2011, 08:07:52 UTC

It is going to hurt to lose someone, even if you did your best to help. I think they'll get home okay, but there's not promises about what will happen then. After all, the cat is out of the bag.

mab_browne January 24 2011, 01:05:43 UTC

So, will our heroes escape? And what will happen when their friendly doctor does does complete his reports? *g*

lit_gal January 30 2011, 08:09:17 UTC

Out of Mexico? Probably. The doctor is covering for them, and by the time he files his report, the Mexican government will have lost their opportunity. However, the secrets will follow them back to the U.S.