Shadows and Siege 12

[lit_gal]

I got to chimera!!  I got to chimera!!!  I'm so excited!!!  And I have now forgiven

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Shadows And Siege 12

[slashpuppy]

God I'm glad the Sentinel muse is flowing again. I've so missed this. And getting a chapter every day or so? Awesome!

Wee fixes:
I don't suppose you have another room available, [available?]
that the two member of SG-1 [members]
one who possess equipment [possesses]
at least if we had an explosives [any explosives]
Suddenly, jerked and gave a sound [Suddenly, Jim]
Only his only hand on Blair's back [Only his hand]

Re: Shadows And Siege 12

[lit_gal]

Oh, the Sentinel muse is on steroids which is why I wasn't even stopping to answer comments there for a little bit. I can breathe now, but I still what to get the next parts out so bad! And thank you so much for the catches. I do adore you!!

[lit_gal]

Oh, I think it's totally good they have separate cells because Blair really does want to kick the man, but he'll get his own later!

[mab_browne]

You are clearly on a bio/genetics kick at the moment, between this and the short you wrote, and I like the way it comes out in your writing.

[lit_gal]

I hadn't thought about that, but I am, aren't I? The muse goes where the muse will. Hell, maybe thinking about chimera and genetics triggered the other story. I'm just glad you've enjoyed the weirdness.

[sif_aka_joanna]

Another great chapter! It is a testament to your writing that I am about to bust with frustration at Jack! Blair just isn't able to get through his skull about his sentinel's skills. I hope that they get on the same page (book?) to resolve some of this. I can see Jack this thick,but I would think that Danny would be close to buying a clue and Jack eventually listens to Daniel.

[lit_gal]

Jack has his goa'uld manners on, that's for sure. I think he'll figure it out eventually, but he is damaging his chances of recruiting a couple of seriously good workers.

[betagoddess]

Yikes! Now I want to know what has Jim wound so tight! Oh noes! *g*

Can't wait for more. Loving this Crossover! =>}

[lit_gal]

I would tease you, only it's taken me so long to get back to my comments, you already know. Yeah, muse has been demanding lately.

[betagoddess]

Hey! I'd way rather you listened to your muse than reply to my comments. *g*

[lit_gal]

The last week or so, my muse is all I could listen to. That doesn't sound particularly healthy, does it? I just get excited when a story really starts to pull together.