(Untitled)

[lit_gal]

I just put up a bit more of the Stageplay Universe (NCIS). HOWEVER, I really just want to play. I have one more day of freedom before a long slog at work, and

Comments

[lit_gal]

Gibbs settled into a chocolate brown couch and watched the show. Scantily dressed men and women wandered through the plush seating, numbers written on their lower back as they teased and flirted their way through the room. Most of the couches had a single buyers--a middle aged man with a huge paunch on one couch, a beautiful woman with a severe business suit on another. A few couches had couples. But what Gibbs really paid attention to were the slaves

[hawk_soaring]

Well, shit is right!! *blinks* Wow -- this exceeded all my expectations. :) I loved it and would love to know where this goes. *G*

[lit_gal]

Yeah, Gibbs did not expect that, but if Tony's been gone for that long and if he's been handled right, he would be identifying with the captors by this point.

[hawk_soaring]

Absolutely. Catching Gibbs by surprise was great. I think the use of "Agent Gibbs" Instead of his alias was what really did it for me.

[lit_gal]

That's the moment when Gibbs realized that Tony wasn't on his side anymore.

[hawk_soaring]

Yeah -- it was subtle and so well done. It really got me. Thank you again.

[taylorgibbs]

Wait...what? Stopping there? Nooo!

[lit_gal]

I really am using this exercise to torture readers, aren't I?

[stage_mgr]

No sh*t!

[lit_gal]

Awwww. I'm sorry. Kinda

[lit_gal]

Awwww. I do think I'll write more of this one eventually. Hopefully.

[starkat75]

Yes, more, please! :-)
I wanna know how they will get out of it.

[lit_gal]

I love that you're assuming they do :D

[zazreil]

Sadly as much as I love Tony, I think he could be broken. It wouldn't even take that much. Just the right kind of handling. Typical torture I think he could withstand, trying to get info dragged out of him, nope no luck. But retraining him with out expecting him to give up government secrets - yeah - ouch. Enjoyed it though