a pathetic little story i decided to write when i saw a drawing by luis royo

[lissakitten]

"You got yourself into ths mess. You know that, right?" Kei refused to look me in the eye. "If you'd have just stayed quiet like the rest of us none of this would have happened." He clapsed his hands nervously in front of him, a habit he'd developed when we were children growing up together. My darling Kei, always the gentleman even here in La'

Comments

[surfer4bilabong]

I like it a lot Lissa...it reminds me of something...but i haven't pin pointed it yet... but i like it

9.7 out of 10

[lissakitten]

whoo! two lucky numbers in my rating, thats gotte be good.

[rosesfallsoftly]

OH! must read more! *eyes light up with sudden interest* I love reading things that are very descriptive, and it certainly didn't lack any of that. Your words paint a vivid picture in my mind and thats AWESOME!

... patiently awaits part II...

[lissakitten]

lol. thank you. i like... adjectives. things without them seem too boring.