Ha, very nice. Initially I thought it was just a story about an orgy but as you read on it seems more like it's a metaphor for a person's life. I like it!
Unless of course I'm misinterpreting it, in which case I disapprove of it strongly. ;-)
The first time I started incorporating my own personal feelings into my writing, it felt really dangerous. People would be able to understand me? They'd know my weaknesses and be able to manipulate them like a puppet!
Then I realized that it made my writing a lot better, that my faults weren't that big a deal, and that I had been playing WAY too much Vampire. ;-)
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Interesting. Me, I prefer to face the nights, especially the winter ones, with company.
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Unless of course I'm misinterpreting it, in which case I disapprove of it strongly. ;-)
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You get the cookie.
It started as a freewrite, but ended up being rather allegorical. Truth be told, I was almost hoping no-one caught that part...
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Then I realized that it made my writing a lot better, that my faults weren't that big a deal, and that I had been playing WAY too much Vampire. ;-)
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I always do incorporate my feelings into my writing.. okay, not every time, but often. See this:http://aldersprig.livejournal.com/783.html#cutid7 ("So it's all rainy here... bet you would like it," he begins....) and this: http://aldersprig.livejournal.com/327.html#cutid1
Certain things I'd rather keep hidden behind nice tidy veils, however. I guess this veil wasn't quite thick enough :-)
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