Something Worse Than a Dragon

[liriehalliwell]

Have you ever noticed how LJ never saves drafts for the really long and very crucial posts, however always backs up the one liners? Urgh.

So innyway! As many other fans, I as well have succumbed to the wonders of our dgficexchange and have managed to write this little piece over here for blaze_faulaPlus, I was nominated for bunch of stuff and was all eeeeed by that as

Comments

[endorwitch]

i enjoyed this!
i like Dracos career. i dont know if its original but i dont recall seeing a fic where thats his job before so that was pretty cool. and the smut was good. hehehe

there are a few typos and that kind of distracted me. i dont like to point out errors and stuff because i cant write for crap so being critical of others work seem mean....but this bit was another spot that sort of pulled me up and ruined the flow of the story for me because i am sure thats not right - “ "Can’t wait to get rid of me, are you?”
I would think it should be ", can you?" or ", eh?".

"are you?"...ok i never was taught proper grammer but i read a lot and i know what sounds off and that just doesnt sound RIGHT.
it would only work if the sentence was something like "waiting to be rid of me, are you?"

lols i am going on and on about this but i guess its because i cant give you some clear grammatic rule that says that sounds weird! :D

But it was an awesome story all teh same so ignore my whining and remember that yo!!!!!!!111 :D
adding to my lj

[liriehalliwell]

I'm glad you liked the story and that you pointed that out to me. Now that I think about it, it does sound a bit off. Eek. *goes to mend it*

[jai_faim]

I SAY. That was fantastic.

[ro_byn]

Great! Ginny was a tad tarty but hey she can't always be sugary sweet. ;) I love the way you write their banter, keeps me giggling. Keep up the good writing and good luck with NaNoWriMo.

[liriehalliwell]

The NaNoWriMo was two years ago and I crashed =\

But thanks for liking it =)

[frust_sheep]

Yeah, fascinating. ;D I really liked it. It was a great story. :D