Twin Souls: 37: Not Alone

May 14, 2013 11:21

Title: Chapter 37: Not Alone
Arc: Twin Souls
Characters: Kyouraku/Ukitake
Rating: PG-13 for violence
Summary: In which the boys figure out what it is that they could and really should be doing, and Daisuke figures out the boys might well be the death of him.
Author's Notes: Whew! Thank you all for sticking with me on this very very long ride. Many ( Read more... )

kyouraku, fanfic, writing, ukitake, bleach

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empty_mirrors May 14 2013, 22:35:28 UTC
Wow! Excellent instalment. Very exciting. I love your fight scenes. There's so much movement and flow, and they are incredibly vivid. I adored your solution to the adjucha Shunsui and Jyuushiro were fighting. That worked brilliantly. And then plot on top of that, and Daisuke's bankai. Kudos and wow again. Thank you so much for updating. I really enjoyed this.

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liralen May 14 2013, 22:43:05 UTC
Very happy you enjoyed it and all the threads that ended up tying themselves off in here... whew... *dances about*

Thank you!!

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Addictive zoniecatz May 15 2013, 00:02:32 UTC
Your stories are like crack to me! I see an update - my heart rate increases, my breathing gets fast & shallow, and I want to drop everything else to take it in... At the same time I'm longing for the high of the conclusion, I find myself desperately hoping there's more to come. Gods of wood pulp & ink, woman, how DO you do it (along w/ all the other stuff you do)?? Thanks for being such an inspiration... !!! (written partway into this chapter...)

EDIT - Oh thank heavens it wasn't the end! (Even tho' I'm sure you're ready for it 2 B over >.< ) Well done , loved how what you already set up w/ the adjucha(?) in the caves plays right into the boys' strengths. Thanks for your hard work and for not abandoning this fic!! *sighs happily*

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Re: Addictive liralen May 15 2013, 16:13:39 UTC
*sigh happily* Thank you so much! I'm so happy that you really have enjoyed this one, too...

It isn't quite the end, and yeah, the boys figured out what they had to do. I'm very happy that I've stuck with this and am going to Finish it!!

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incandescens May 15 2013, 00:37:27 UTC
It all ties together beautifully. Excellent writing, and well done!

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liralen May 15 2013, 16:14:16 UTC
*hugs happily* Thank you! Yeah... I'm very happy how the plots finally worked out in this. Thank you so very much for helping me make it better!!

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incandescens May 15 2013, 21:37:54 UTC
(hugs) My pleasure (and honour to be asked!)

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liralen May 16 2013, 20:49:40 UTC
(hugs happily) On ff.net, with this installment, Twin Souls got 500 hits in three days, and several good reviews on a site that rather doesn't do reviews, so it's definitely an ending that fits what the people who've been rereading it seem to want... so yay!!!

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cptnsuz September 4 2013, 08:32:57 UTC
I started reading this epic fic almost 2 years to today. I've enjoyed every moment of it as I slowly read my way through it :) It was so gratifying to finally see Shunsui and Ukitake find their shikai in the most recent chapters.

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liralen September 5 2013, 20:44:57 UTC
Wow!! I'm so happy you've stuck with it! I'm still working on the next chapter, but I promise it'll be finished! I'm not sure when, exactly, but I'm getting to where all the loose ends are getting tied up in good ways.

Thank you so much!!

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