Winter War: Jyuushiro: Falling

Jan 23, 2012 11:15

Title: Jyuushiro: Falling
Arc: Winter War
Characters: Soi Fong, Ukitake, Isane, Barragan, Hachigen
Rating/Warnings:PG-13, Violence
Summary: The shade of Barragan comes after Jyuushiro and Isane, and Soi Fong and Ushoda Hachigen come to their rescue.
Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach of its characters, and I do not make money from these writings.
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Comments 18

vince_moon January 23 2012, 21:07:31 UTC
Wow, what an exciting story. I don't really get to read a lot of stories with Isane in them, so this was extra fun for me.

Well done.

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liralen January 23 2012, 23:01:37 UTC
Thank you!! Yes, we have Isane throughout Winter War, on the Soul Society side. We also seemed to have taken out most of the Major Players and substituted in nearly all the side chars as the main folks in the story.

Glad you enjoyed it!!

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incandescens January 23 2012, 22:39:13 UTC
Have I said that this is an awesome chapter? Because it is. Utterly tearjerking, but yet with a great feeling of satisfaction. Everyone living up to their potential, and everyone willing to fight to the utmost.

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liralen January 23 2012, 23:02:25 UTC
Thank you! Very very much. I really wanted to be able to *use* all the things we'd all set up in this. Whew. Thank you.

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archangelbeth January 23 2012, 22:59:20 UTC
*sniffles lots and hopes all the blades can be healed...*

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liralen January 23 2012, 23:02:59 UTC
*patpats*

I hope so too. *grins* I've loved writing Ukitake through this... but he is sooooo tired...

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archangelbeth January 25 2012, 02:53:56 UTC
At least their side of things is calmed down enough that he can get a nap? Yes?

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liralen January 25 2012, 04:45:28 UTC
*laughs*

Well, thing are pretty much done on this side.

I can say that.

As to the rest, I can't say if Jyuushiro is going to wake up or not. <.< >.>

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askerian January 24 2012, 07:51:17 UTC
Wow. That battle scene was epic. Full of desperate moments! and aw Isane ;_________; So brave. She's gonna have to learn to fight one-handed now, I hope that'll come fast. ;__;

I like that Soi Fong gets to be a real badass too. ♥

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liralen January 24 2012, 18:12:31 UTC
Thank you!! Yes. Soi Fong as badass is *fun* *laughs*

I suspect Isane will get help from Soi Fong and Kuukaku. And/or with the City back in their keep, they'll have the facilities to do whatever it was in canon that gave Soi Fong her arm back again. I hope!

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duck113 January 27 2012, 19:02:22 UTC
Wow- intense, scary, poor Ukitake pretty much fighting with willpower alone, & with a gaping hole where Shunsui used to be...Isane really rising to the occasion & Soi Fong's anger & frustration (& I know she HATES Jyuu protecting her at his own expense in the end!)

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liralen May 8 2013, 14:29:08 UTC
Totally... I think that if Jyuushiro wakes up, Fong's going to have lots of words with him.... *laughs*

Very happy you liked this chapter, dear.

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