Painted Window Fic: Silas and the Hitman

Sep 13, 2009 11:41

Title: Silas and the Hitman
Characters: Silas and William Johnson, with some Decker
Rating: NC-17 for lots of bad language, very explicit sex, brief asphyxiation, and details of a mob hit.
Word Count: 4460
Background: This is for Silverleen, who owns Silas. She had a contest a while back for art about her characters, including one Silas. Silas ( Read more... )

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ginnyvos September 13 2009, 19:14:33 UTC
This is... Well actually this is pretty awesome and priceless in an ironically funny way, which is odd seeing as assassins and prostitution are... not my kinks.

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liralen September 13 2009, 19:46:59 UTC
Thank you, very much for reading and commenting.

*laughs* They're not exactly my kinks either, and maybe that shows a bit in how they're meeting more as human beings than just as a prostitute and a killer...

William's pretty broken in his own ways and Silas in others; and it was intriguing to me to see what kind of help a hitman would want from a prostitute that wasn't just... business as usual. *laughs*

Yeah, I signed up for this months ago and it was blocking the hell out of me for everything else, so now that it's out, I hope I can just go on.

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annieroo2 September 15 2009, 21:58:17 UTC
WOW! That was really interesting. I had a bit of trouble visualizing the players, but that's because I have no background for this world.

The movements and personalities themselves though were really clear.

I loved the twist ending and the ambiguity of which side were the bad guys.

I liked the dangerous yet playful feel to it. Very cool. :D

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liralen September 16 2009, 03:49:30 UTC
Yeah, and I didn't actually physically describe anyone that Silas knew really well, either, as for him they're just background. Sorry about that...

I'm glad that the personalities came through well!

And I'm really proud of that plot twist at the end, too. *laughs* I'm so glad that you liked it! Bad guys and bad guys...

I'm very glad you found that balance to it, I wanted dangerous and still humorous, so I'm really glad that that came through! Thank you, so much for commenting!

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elfling_eryn September 12 2010, 10:05:13 UTC
just found it linked from that other story and I have to say I love it
plus it's nice to know who that special high school crush is...am I right?
Keep up your great work and I'd love to learn more about those boys

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liralen September 13 2010, 03:46:40 UTC
You're entirely correct. *laughs* Matt is the high school crush. *grins* I'm very glad that you enjoyed it!

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