Silver and Black: Act 3: The Condo, Scene 3 'The Guest Bedroom'

[liralen]

Title: Act 3: The Condo, Scene 3 'The Guest Bedroom'
Series: Silver and Black
Characters: Chris and David
Genre: Modern day yaoi romance
Rating: NC-17, for oral sex between the boys.
Beta:mysocalledhell Thank you!
Summary: David has invited Chris to his condo. The two men meet up over dinner and homework and things get a little hot.
Word Count: 4478
A/N: This

Comments

[mysocalledhell]

comment ... cause I can and I know you two need it ... I'm gonna say stuffs again ... I absolutely love this story ... the characters are extremely lovable and very enjoyable to read ... I've settled for reading characters that only get some kind of emotional response from me instead of characters that I love and I am loving these two very much so.

the pacing and interaction between them is fabulous and very well done ... it's not so fast paced as to be unbelievable with the interaction you have showing.

I'm absolutely adoring this story and I can't wait to see what happens next.

[liralen]

Thank you, so very much, for both your help and for this lovely comment. I'm really glad that the interactions work for you and that it's well-written enough to give you an emotional response. That's very good to know.

Neat to know that the pacing works for you, too, and that you're enjoying it enough to look forward to more! *smiles*

[liralen]

Wow. Thank you for staying up for us!! I'm glad that you enjoyed it so much.

Thanks!! ♥

[2metaldog]

This is a really enjoyable story and I like that they were just a little awkward with each other at the beginning. Made it far more believable in my mind. I think they've rather sweet together. Thank you for brightening up my evening with this.

[liralen]

You're very welcome. Yeah, they aren't just hitting it off to start. I'm glad that you found then entertaining and sweet. *grins*

Thank you!!

[ginnyvos]

Heeh, with my moment to moment squeeing, I know liralen knows I adored this like mad! Because I did! The characters are so very alive. They're people with their bad and good sides, who have their insecurities and a talent for ignoring their good qualities and knowing their bad qualities all too well.
They are also totally adorable and huggable.

It's cool how much of the two of you as writers I can find back in your characters... They're not you, perse, but they do reflect the type of person you are and the experiences you've had. I notice how you use them to make the characters even more real, more alive.

Also the sex, both despite, with and because all of its awkwardness was smoking!

Lastly, for some odd reason I totally love the doorman! ^^

[liralen]

Heh, Wally kind of grew on both of us. I like him a lot.

I'm so glad that you're enjoying them so much!! And that you're finding fun information about us from the guys. *grins* And I'm very glad that you like them a lot for being more real.

Thank you!!

[googlymooglies]

HOLY FUCK

YOU TWO ARE A DEADLY COMBINATION T_T

omg... I want a Chris and a David to take home. X3

[liralen]

♥ I'm so glad you enjoyed us together on this!

Thank you!

And, heck, I wouldn't mind taking home a Chris and a David, myself.