Drabble: What Time Might Take

Oct 03, 2008 23:48

Title: What Time Might Take
Requester: chuchacz
Series: Bleach
Topic: Byakuya/Renji  "Autumn"

Kouyou, the viewing of falling maple leaves, as closely followed as spring's hanami, and, for Kuchiki Byakuya, less fraught with memories of blood for all that the leaves more closely resembled that color.

He sat seiza. Thick earthenware cup warmed his hands. ( Read more... )

drabble, fanfic, writing, fall, bleach

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incandescens October 4 2008, 13:44:23 UTC
Pretty! And suitably transitory.

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liralen October 4 2008, 16:17:36 UTC
Thank you!

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liralen October 4 2008, 16:17:47 UTC
*smiles* Thank you, very much.

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archangelbeth October 4 2008, 15:28:52 UTC
Oh. My. Yes.

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liralen October 4 2008, 16:17:59 UTC
Yay! I'm glad it pleased.

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akuni October 4 2008, 17:16:45 UTC
Such lovely imagery in so few words. Well done!

(Bonus points from me for having Ichigo, Renji, and Rukia goofing around as friends. I am such a sucker for that stuff! :D)

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liralen October 4 2008, 22:43:08 UTC
XD Yay! Bonus points! *smiles* Yeah... I know a few folks that are really, really for the pairing, and being an ex-manager I just hold my head at the whole thought of a taichou/reporting-fukutaichou scenario, so I couldn't quite... This could be read lots of different ways, and I liked it that way. And they should get time off to goof a bit. *smiles*

Not that Byakuya would ever join them, but it's cool for them to have their fun. Plus, really, it's just about how Byakuya thinks of the fall and the traditional viewings and what he actually sees... someone pointed out that this is a good example of mono no aware. Beauty in that which is only fleeting...

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xshelaghx October 4 2008, 18:36:23 UTC
Oh wow! So lovely. It feels much longer than it is because it says so much.

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liralen October 4 2008, 22:44:08 UTC
Oh, what a lovely compliment of the piece. Thank you, so much! Wow.

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