Silver and Black: Act 1: The Play

Sep 02, 2008 17:04

Title: The Play
Series: Silver and Black
Characters: Chris and David
Genre: Yaoi, modern day romance.
Rating: PG-13 for language
Beta: mysocalledhell Thank you!
Summary: David goes to see Chris in "Shakespeare in Love" and gets a bit more than he bargained for.
Words: 6066
A/N: This is an original story by stark_black and I. She plays Chris and I play David. Hope you ( Read more... )

original, writing, david_old

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ginnyvos September 3 2008, 20:38:54 UTC
This was lovely. While the start was a bit slow for me (but that might have more to do with low energy levels from my side than with bad writing from your's. David really caught my eye and my heart, already (even though really that should be Chris, who's closer in age and stuff, but I'm afraid I have an affinity with computer-geeks with no life XD)
The bit about the cyber-cafe really caught my eye ^^

Too tired for further coherent review now, but I'm looking forward to the next part!

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liralen September 3 2008, 20:58:47 UTC
Yeah, it does start a little slowly on David's part, as his life's pretty... simple.

Cool that you like David. He's definitely your kind of guy if that's your preference. *grins* Driven Asian computer geek, for whom machines make far more sense than people.

The cyber-cafe should be fun. *grins*

*gentle hug for the tired* And thank you, very much for commenting when you were so tired!

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stark_black September 3 2008, 23:00:24 UTC
"...I'm afraid I have an affinity with computer-geeks with no life XD"

Oh, me too. I have a crush on David already. x)

Thanks for reading!

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liralen September 4 2008, 05:06:04 UTC
*blushes*

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calm_isolation September 3 2008, 21:05:40 UTC
Oh this is wonderful ladies! <3

I love them both they are so sweet. Chris is adorable and David is perfect I can not wait for them to meet!!

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liralen September 3 2008, 21:37:50 UTC
I love your icon. Someone suggested "The Geek and the Prince" as a subtitle and it... would fit. *laughs*

Glad you loved the new boys on the block. Wow. It's good to know other people like them, too.

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stark_black September 3 2008, 23:01:11 UTC
YAY!!!

*is excited that you're excited*

Thanks for reading!!! XD

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