I'm still trying to write. I've written a few fannish bits and pieces that I may put up a little later. For right now here's some more of my post-apocalypse with MAGIC! story.
“What’s next?” Anne asked because it was the easiest thing to say, the easiest feeling to unravel from the knot in her chest. It was so good to have someone to talk to again.
“You can do whatever you want,” the girl said, her voice a whisper, the words ripples in the air. “But this is as far as I can go.”
Ah! What? Why? NO! Omg, stop it.
“Goodbye,” she heard. A whisper, a plea. She looked up and the girl was already gone, swallowed up by the fog. She’d left nothing behind.
Here's a thing I really like in stories/fic that you do so well - you always end on the perfect line, the perfect note.
I would say 'go write more,' but I hear you are busy writing Dean/Cas (OMGGGGGGGG!) so do that first and then write more of this. K? Cool.
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“You can do whatever you want,” the girl said, her voice a whisper, the words ripples in the air. “But this is as far as I can go.”
Ah! What? Why? NO! Omg, stop it.
“Goodbye,” she heard. A whisper, a plea. She looked up and the girl was already gone, swallowed up by the fog. She’d left nothing behind.
Here's a thing I really like in stories/fic that you do so well - you always end on the perfect line, the perfect note.
I would say 'go write more,' but I hear you are busy writing Dean/Cas (OMGGGGGGGG!) so do that first and then write more of this. K? Cool.
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