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[lipservice_]

I wrote a poem for my english class. Unfortunately we had to size it down into three, four lined, stanzas. It was originally two pages.

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[soundjealous]

yeah too bad mine really sucks it's about a child in the middle of divorce (ok?)

[lipservice_]

mine sucks too. I think I reread it too much.

[educatedguess_]

this sucks.

i love poems, but i can't write any for the life of me.

you write really well (from what i can tell of your poem).

i'm jealous.

[lipservice_]

at first I thought you meant my writing sucks. Although, I wouldnt blame you.

[heartonmysweatr]

hey hey hey i dig ya poem and i have a book that you need to read that suites you PERRFECT im reading it my mom passed it down to me and you deff. need to read it its called a tree grows in brooklyn now read it noww <333