M/AJ: What She Deserves- 1/3

[royalty25]

Title: What She Deserves
Author: Royalty25
Pairing: Montague/Angelina
Prompt: #39 Help [2/50]
Word Count: 888
Rating: PG
Summary: Rescued by a not so mysterious stranger.
Disclaimer: These characters are never mine.

He hated everything about her. The very thought of looking at her made his stomach twist into a tight knot. She wasn't ugly. Quite the

Comments

[pandapremium]

Very nice! I especially liked the line

"It turned into something twisted and eager."

That describes the situation so accurately! Good word choice!

[sellthelie]

That was great! Another one with an interesting future! Can't wait to see where it goes! :)

[irisri]

I'm completely with the two above. Very nice!