Eee! This is wonderful, and I want the rest RIGHT NOW. Am I being demanding? It's very different from A Bracelet of Elephants, but equally brilliant. Just shows what an incredible writer you are, I suppose.
I love the mirroring in the last line of each sentence. *is grammer dork*
Thank you muchly for the encouragement! :D I've had bits and pieces of this floating around for months ever since I heard the song - I thought if I just started posting it would motivate me to focus and keep going until it was done. (and I don't even have Word installed yet, I'm writing this in Notepad, lol! I'm so happy to have a computer again...) (btw, speaking of "Bracelet", I was wondering if you ever saw the last batch? I made a couple posts in a row, I thought maybe you might've missed them. It's here: http://lionille.livejournal.com/64829.html - just in case. I swear I'm not fishing for feedback!) edit:(and now I have to double-post this comment, too ~ when will I learn it's coffee first, then html???)
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and, oooh - an inspiring Hr/C icon! ;)
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I love the mirroring in the last line of each sentence. *is grammer dork*
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(btw, speaking of "Bracelet", I was wondering if you ever saw the last batch? I made a couple posts in a row, I thought maybe you might've missed them. It's here: http://lionille.livejournal.com/64829.html - just in case. I swear I'm not fishing for feedback!) edit:(and now I have to double-post this comment, too ~ when will I learn it's coffee first, then html???)
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