Comments | lionille: May's June

lionille

May's June

Sep 04, 2010 05:13

Title: May’s June
Characters: Glitch, various, OC
Rating: G for Gen
Disclaimer: None of these characters are mine, except May and June. ;)
Word Count: 2,209

( Tis sweet to know there is an eye will mark our coming, and look brighter when we come. ~Lord Byron )

glitch, tinman

Comments 4

kseda September 4 2010, 15:56:38 UTC

...congrats, you made me cry! But don't fret since these are good, heartwarming tears. Someday we need to figure out how you make it look so effortless, this penchant you have for creating beautiful, graceful little tales. Then we can bottle it and share t with the world because everyone needs this, they do.

May is heartbreaking and joyful and I adore her to pieces, thank you so much for sharing her story :D

lionille September 4 2010, 18:56:47 UTC

eep! *warm glow* Thank you, kseda, for such a wonderful comment, you made my day!

surranndie September 4 2010, 19:14:21 UTC

*still mulling this over in my brain* It's taken me a few hours to really absorb this. There's so many elements that just make me go "MEEP!" and now I'm trying to form a proper response.

Things that make me MEEP:
- Em and Hank having been Glitch's foster parents. That's just ~brilliant~ and I love how simple his reply to DG was, about how he would only trust them with something so important.
- How Cain didn't question or hesitate when Glitch came for help late at night, he just grabbed his stuff and went. Glitch didn't even have to finish his question. *squee*
- Glitch's confrontation with the Queen over throwing things on the scrap heap and how he unzipped his head to make his point. *GAH*

I think what I really like about this is the theme of deep friendship and caring. Raw understands that Glitch connected to this broken robot. Saw that Glitch, in his own way, loves her even though he has no real reason to. Just because he saw something in her.

lionille September 4 2010, 19:37:21 UTC

Thank you, Surr! I'm especially glad you liked the part about Hank and Em having raised Glitch, that hadn't ever occurred to me before, but when he and May were in the car outside the farmhouse it had sort of a 'going to the grandparents'' feel about it and I thought 'ooh'!

lol... Wyatt, ever ready to ride to the rescue! ♥