Wrenched

[lionille]

Title: Wrenched
Characters: Cain, Glitch, DG, Raw, Tutor.
Rating: G
Disclaimer: None of these characters are mine.
Word Count: 1,600
Summary: Helping Glitch brings Cain a step closer to feeling human again.
A/N: Thanks to candacestls, surranndie, blackletter, oddsbobs, signy1, koslorollo for all the insightful beta comments over at ohzeebooks

Comments

[candacestls]

Great changes sweets, the paragraph you added was wonderful, I thought you got Cain's voice just right. I love Cain brushing off Glitch's coat, thinking 'Maybe every bitter cynic needed a wide-eyed optimist around, and vice versa, just to keep things balanced.' Just wonderful!

[lionille]

Thank you! Glad the changes were OK, I just couldn't obsess over it any longer, lol!

[piss_and_ink]

I'm so glad someone FINALLY addressed the fact that Glitch literally took a serious blow to the head by a freaking WRENCH. Because that is some serious damage, there. And this was so touching and lovely. I like it.

[lionille]

Thank you! Yeah, I was pretty horrified no one even asked if he was OK. I mean...if it's anybody, but especially if it's Glitch. Oh well, of such things are hurt/comfort fic made. :)

[koslorollo]

Wrenched! Brilliant idea, love...

What were these people to him now, what had they become?
That whole paragraph is marvelous. Bitter cynicism indeed! But softening, oh hush-hush, like a lullaby... You're just not ready yet, Wyatt. *pets* And maybe they're not either... Patience, Tin Man.

Missing scenes add even more to the DVD - er, the show, to the show! Ah!

*hugs you, and lets the lid down on the box of 'memories'*

[lionille]

Your comments are so lovely and inspiring. ♥
I concur Wyatt still has a ways to go. But he's started down the road... and it leads to Glitch! :D

[koslorollo]

But he's started down the road... and it leads to Glitch!

Ugh... Brain! BRAIN!!! Because there's almost a fic in that... oh wondrously full of imagery... an apologue... with apples...

*grits teeth and can't quite form it*

[lionille]

An applogue! You must find it! YOU MUST!

[surranndie]

Just lovely, m'dear. I really like the small changes in 'family-unit' perspective, they fit well with the time frame of the piece. I'm always such a sucker for h/c, and you do it so well!

[lionille]

Thank you so much! I confess h/c is a favorite genre of mine! ;)

[avari_maethor]

This was such a nice read. I think you captured Cain's voice very nicely :D

[lionille]

Thank you very much! ^^