Comments | linniemac: "Rush" - Chapter Eleven, Part Two

linniemac

"Rush" - Chapter Eleven, Part Two

Mar 15, 2009 18:20

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quellefromage March 16 2009, 02:45:31 UTC

Bravo!! Excellent work. Thanks for braving LJ to post here. I've totally enjoyed the ride.

Now, you are working on something new, yes?

linniemac March 18 2009, 02:06:03 UTC

Thank you SO much for your continued encouragement, sweetie. I really appreciate it, and am glad you enjoyed the story.

I'm about to hit a really busy stretch in RL, so although I've begun researching my next Winchester fic, I don't think I'll even get it started before June. If I'm lucky, I'll be able to post in the fall. Will it be on LJ? Hmmm. Jury's still out, there.

Again, I really have appreciated your encouragement. Thanks very much!

suzmc March 16 2009, 04:21:32 UTC

Fantastic, sugar! Loved it so much. It's so nice to read something not wincest or slash. Thank goodness you're here.

But I'm sad it's over. Pout.

Go write something else.

linniemac March 18 2009, 02:08:37 UTC

Hey, suz, you've been great with the spurs and the love, and I'm really grateful for both! I'm also glad you're sad "Rush" is over...that's a lovely compliment.

Thanks again for all the feedback!

anonymous March 17 2009, 20:56:07 UTC

Very good work, long, strong and balanced.

Maybe those ghosts were a bit too talkative and person-like, but naturally there was Molly to prove us that a ghost can be a person too, not just echo.

And as I'm writing one 25 000 words story myself, I know how hard it is to keep things clear without being blatant and interesting without being confusing.
And this story gave us such a wonderful backstory for "Heart". It works this way, it really works now.

Truly well done!

linniemac March 18 2009, 02:11:53 UTC

Hey, Anonymous. I know you didn't mean Katie, who barely spoke, or Quon-Jin, who said nothing, but I'll admit Clancy was a loquacious Irishman. As you pointed out, however, Molly certainly wasn't the shy, retiring type; also, Sam apparently had quite the conversation with the spirit in "Ghostfacers," so I think there was plenty of precedent for Bull's chattiness.

I'm glad you thought "Rush" gave "Heart" a good lead-in, because that was certainly my own personal goal.

Thanks very much for the feedback!