Broken Japanese Lyrics

Sep 25, 2006 09:11

I wrote some Japanese song lyrics for the band i'm in. But I don't actually speak Japanese. So even though no one will probably speak Japanese either and even though the acoustics are rarely good enough for them to hear me if they did... can you guys tell me if i've made any major, major mistakes or if the lyrics even make sense? and please be nice to me, I don't claim to know what I'm doing!

inu ga sukijyanai
desukara neko ni naritai.
kyo sakana o taberu.
ashita gako ni iku.

shumatsu wa itsumo tanoshi.
demo neko no ho ga suki.
doyobi ni hito wa, chyoto...
demo getsuyobi ni suki da yo.

Sorry it's in romanji. Can someone tell me the kanji for neko?

Thank you in advance.

EDIT: If you just want to be a huge jerk and tell me not to sing in Japanese, then DON'T COMMENT. I said "please be nice" because I know a ton of people on this board are pretentious.
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