Comments | lines_crossed: Round 2 Complete!

everytimeyougo in lines_crossed

Round 2 Complete!

Jul 12, 2009 15:24

Here, for your reading pleasure, is the complete text of Round 2, with only minor editting for tense & typos:

( Round Two )

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Comments 6

sharp2799 July 12 2009, 19:10:44 UTC

It was so nice to read that straight through. There's a good flow here and I really hope they don't screw it up! *glares at everyone*

mabe85 July 12 2009, 19:55:31 UTC

I can see you glaring. And I'm scared.
Hehe.

sharp2799 July 12 2009, 21:40:01 UTC

Then my work here is done. lol

athousandsmiles July 12 2009, 21:23:20 UTC

Oh, I hope he doesn't let her leave. I'll add my glare to sharp2799's. ;-)

This was beautifully written, E.

hilandmum July 12 2009, 23:14:26 UTC

The aftermath. Very like Cameron to need to verify that 'it' happened, very like her to doubt that their is a future for them.

I just hope he stops her before she leaves!

Mum

cassandra_elise July 13 2009, 12:57:03 UTC

*evilgrin* Oh come on, guys, I think some angst would be a welcomed addition to all the fluff and smut we've had . . .