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[dnangel000]

Pulling his shirt closer around her, she emptied the grinds into the filter and into the machine. She turned it on. Absently she turned on the television, having grown tired of the radio. Morning news hour: traffic accident claims the life of a father taking his daughter to soccer practice. Farmers now using drones to monitor their crops. Global

Comments

[bahia]

Thanks for posting! I like the way you describe a somewhat "ordinary" scene using language that brings it alive.

If you could, please add the tag "I could see it" and also bold, italicize, asterisk, or otherwise indicate the line so that readers can easily see where/how you used it. Thank you!

[bahia]

I added the tag for you, but I cannot add the body of your piece. Please bold, italicize, asterisk, or otherwise indicate your line within the piece. Thank you.

[9_xs_cynical]

I like this, it's raw.