Incommunicado - Chapter 1/?

[lindor1306]

Incommunicado

Chapter 1

John lowered himself slowly into the hard plastic chair, sighing sadly as his eyes fell on the man lying motionless in the bed in front of him. He raised his had and gently, oh so carefully, ran his fingers through the other man's hair.

As soon as Sherlock's finger squeezed the trigger, John acted. He threw himself towards

Comments

[encomium]

Wonderful :) Very much in character. Continue, yes? Yes *nods*

[lindor1306]

Don't worry, I'm continuing. Just came back to read the first chapter again before starting on the second :)

[mustangwomant]

Brilliant beginning! I love John’s ability to interpret for Sherlock. This storyline has the potential for both great angst but also great humor and I’m excited to see where you take this.

[darthhellokitty]

Wow - what a scary thing!